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for The Lies We Tell

by flintywoman

person V
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a bit intense.
person turtledonkey27
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
take THAT, grandma! now she knows how it feels and i don\'t feel the least bit sorry for her being overwhelmed. val is awesome as usual. i\'m so glad you\'ve been able to come back to this story, it\'s definitely one of my favorites! and the plot thickens and thickens....i\'m in suspense!
person uppacrick
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You\'re back!!! I\'m so glad. I\'ve really missed you and your wonderful stories. Another great chapter. My only criticism is that most of the \"than\"s should be \"then\"s. Then refers to time or sequence. Than is part of a comparison. Does that help?

Hope you post again soon!
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello hello,

Sorry for how long I\'ve been away. It\'s been a really rough couple of weeks/months... I know, no excuse and what not. I actually got snagged on a scene and needed to step away to let it brew a bit. That and well, not to bitch and moan but life has been crappy lately. Money doesn\'t exist and I\'m working literally 7 days a week and now one of my cats has died! Awful year! My mother in law passed away a year ago in August, my hamster in March, my dog in June and now one of my cats! Been crying a lot.

Open call though, anyone out there with the time to do a professional level edit of Blur? I can pay... not much but I can... Open to any offers. I so need to get Blur finished! HELP ANYONE HELP?? (please? pretty please... with smut on top?)

Keyonnamc, don\'t worry, I\'ll finish it... might take me a little bit but I will. We\'re in the home streatch now. Ideally, I\'ll have Lies done in like 2 weeks? Maybe 3?

Anon and anyone else who\'s been worried, thanks, it means a lot to me to know that I can\'t just fall off the face of the planet and have no one notice!

Sara, lol well, I just write what I see... which is sometimes the problem! So yeah, it progresses, not too slow is it?

Uppacrick ya should know me better by now! Then and Than are some of my most difficult confusions. I know the difference but I can\'t get them out of my head right. I am trying, really I am. I need it on a post it note stapled to my forehead. Sorry I still suck at that!

Anyway, back to work... enjoy the new chapter! (Betty Maddocks is one of my fav people in my head!)

Sarah
person Lada
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is getting better and better with every new chapter! Very emotional, very intense in feelings/ And pretty scary about all that hunting stuff!

Thank you for not abandon the writing! It was worth to wait!
person Flamingolo
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So great to see more from you, you creative fountain. Excellent, realistic developments; I adore these characters, especially Trist, and how he gives so much while still being locked up pretty tight (*snicker*...wait, isn\'t that a good thing for a yaoi fic?). The plot keeps moving right along, you have a knack for sucking readers in. Keep up the smashing work!
person keyonnamc
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update it soon. I need to know what is going on. I love this story and I want it completed, if possible.
../\\_/\\
.(^_^)
()().()()
person Anonymous
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was worried about you.

Thanks for the update; I hope life\'s going well for you.

<3
person Sara
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh great you finally updated!!! Glad that things aren\'t rushed and that the story is being developed slowly :)
person Tamela
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where are you? I keep checking in to see if you have updated yet but to my bad luck, no. I hope everything is alright with you.