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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. I suppose I\'m not as desperate to finish now. I\'m too tired to be desperate (how does that work?) Anyway... Chapter 42! Almost to the end!!!
I wasn\'t sure at first, just where you\'d go with it. Again, the story had just flowed away from anything I expected and I\'m finding that delightful. And Trist! Awe boy! Can I have him? I wanna take heem home wif meee! He\'s a doll. Just a wonderful doll. I\'ve loved how you have seemed to allow the big, scary boys in your stories have a need and a soft underbelly. Rather than being control freaks, many of them like the fact they have someone they can let their control go to. That\'s rather intoxicating, actually, reading about them and I dare say it\'s one reason I love this so much! :)
Things are going to get interesting from here on out. I\'m sure I\'m not alone in waiting for whatever the kids are asking to say. It\'s always surprising to me that characters don\'t go to the obvious - but then, is it the obvious at all? Maybe it\'s just a dead end? A blind somewhat? We\'ll not know until the end! But gosh I can\'t wait! It should be a blast!!!
Okay... now that that\'s been said, I am off! Woosh! More story to READ! YAY!
I wasn\'t sure at first, just where you\'d go with it. Again, the story had just flowed away from anything I expected and I\'m finding that delightful. And Trist! Awe boy! Can I have him? I wanna take heem home wif meee! He\'s a doll. Just a wonderful doll. I\'ve loved how you have seemed to allow the big, scary boys in your stories have a need and a soft underbelly. Rather than being control freaks, many of them like the fact they have someone they can let their control go to. That\'s rather intoxicating, actually, reading about them and I dare say it\'s one reason I love this so much! :)
Things are going to get interesting from here on out. I\'m sure I\'m not alone in waiting for whatever the kids are asking to say. It\'s always surprising to me that characters don\'t go to the obvious - but then, is it the obvious at all? Maybe it\'s just a dead end? A blind somewhat? We\'ll not know until the end! But gosh I can\'t wait! It should be a blast!!!
Okay... now that that\'s been said, I am off! Woosh! More story to READ! YAY!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!
Okay... small reviews, because I\'m way behind. But a fun way to begin! I love the shocker he gets \"WHAT? Gay bar? Hunh?\"
And this cousin is going to be interesting. I\'ve already got designs on what\'s it all about, which probably are all wrong. Still - we got an upcoming unromantic valentine\'s weekend where he\'s gonna stand in for poor Gavan, I hope!!!! (I won\'t know until I read though, so I gotta get back to it!)
Okay... small reviews, because I\'m way behind. But a fun way to begin! I love the shocker he gets \"WHAT? Gay bar? Hunh?\"
And this cousin is going to be interesting. I\'ve already got designs on what\'s it all about, which probably are all wrong. Still - we got an upcoming unromantic valentine\'s weekend where he\'s gonna stand in for poor Gavan, I hope!!!! (I won\'t know until I read though, so I gotta get back to it!)
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my.. Client? Dang! this isn\'t what I\'d expected (but I should know better by now)
Okay.. on to the next.. can\'t stop! Gotta read! (too impatient to write anything of worth just yet!)
Okay.. on to the next.. can\'t stop! Gotta read! (too impatient to write anything of worth just yet!)
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I admire your work. The story is going smoothly.
I love the character developement. Val\'s so realistic...Fuck it, all of them are. You\'re great.
I love the character developement. Val\'s so realistic...Fuck it, all of them are. You\'re great.
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what a sex scene. That was *hot*, and mouth-wateringly pretty. I adore how well-written your characters consistently tend to be, and there\'s no hopping into bed for a mindless shag followed by proclamations of undying love. A lovely kind of tug-of-war fic you\'ve got going here, and I\'m loving it! Looking forward to seeing more from you!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was hot!!!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you\'re really cranking out the chapters now. It\'s so sweet to see how their relationship has developed.
I can\'t wait until the next chapter.
I can\'t wait until the next chapter.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup..another couple good chapters.....i applaud you....keep up the good work..please don\'t leave me hanging for too long....
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
wonderful chapter, and that song fits right in, as if made for Val and Trist. Keep going, even if I dread the coming confrontation.
MR
wonderful chapter, and that song fits right in, as if made for Val and Trist. Keep going, even if I dread the coming confrontation.
MR