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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooooo!!! I hope Trist doesn\'t die!! But i love the way that dream/vision came back into the storyline, i had forgotton about it and i had thought Trist had changed it.
Can\'t wait for more!
Can\'t wait for more!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an amazing updated. I need to know if Trist did save Val and himself or did both of them get hurt.? Did they get the bad guys? Update soon.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH!!!!!! NO NO NO NO NO NOOOO!
Ooo.. you realize you\'re an EEEEEVIL writer person! I\'m going to no longer read ANYthing you EVER write AGAIN!!!! How could you! *sob* it\'s terrible... left on a cliff hanger! How COULD you???
;) Well... maybe I\"ll read the next chapter because I cant help myself. Darn you! I\'m too addicted to say no! (which would be, I suppose, the meaning of addiction - yes) ..
Beautiful chapter! I love how things got hairy and how you kept it from the readers just how things did! Poor Trist is there one moment, then he\'s deep in dead memories, and then he\'s in the throes of that nightmare vision and we\'re all \"Wait! Wait! I thought it was past! WAIT?!!? What\'s happening? Is this another vision? Is this real? Is he dead? ACK!!!\"
Hee hee... good place to quit.
And then again - I\'m caught up with waiting for the next chapter and looking forward to it very much.
Ooo.. you realize you\'re an EEEEEVIL writer person! I\'m going to no longer read ANYthing you EVER write AGAIN!!!! How could you! *sob* it\'s terrible... left on a cliff hanger! How COULD you???
;) Well... maybe I\"ll read the next chapter because I cant help myself. Darn you! I\'m too addicted to say no! (which would be, I suppose, the meaning of addiction - yes) ..
Beautiful chapter! I love how things got hairy and how you kept it from the readers just how things did! Poor Trist is there one moment, then he\'s deep in dead memories, and then he\'s in the throes of that nightmare vision and we\'re all \"Wait! Wait! I thought it was past! WAIT?!!? What\'s happening? Is this another vision? Is this real? Is he dead? ACK!!!\"
Hee hee... good place to quit.
And then again - I\'m caught up with waiting for the next chapter and looking forward to it very much.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!!!!! This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter. This story really sucked me in. Please, please keep on writting.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH!!!!!!!!
Oooo.. supernatural stuff! This is awesome! Better than my ideas! I can\'t WAIT! and I hate that this chapter was like this and I should sit and write some stuff glowing and marvelous only I can barely type because I\"m too excited about the next chapter! Hee hee!
So forget it! No reviews for YOU! I gotta READ!
Oooo.. supernatural stuff! This is awesome! Better than my ideas! I can\'t WAIT! and I hate that this chapter was like this and I should sit and write some stuff glowing and marvelous only I can barely type because I\"m too excited about the next chapter! Hee hee!
So forget it! No reviews for YOU! I gotta READ!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t usually do fangirl screaming, but AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!
You can\'t have left us like this!
What happens next?????
You can\'t have left us like this!
What happens next?????
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhh. I am feeling the bullet here. Will I survive? You can write my dear.
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another set! Oh my gosh! I\'m on a roll!
Ooo.. and there\'s some good parts in here I\'d point out if I could remember but I\'m tired and sick and should be in bed... so I won\'t even try to remember them.. But I loved hwo Trist got ready for the day! WHEE! nice set of para\'s there..
Ooo.. and there\'s some good parts in here I\'d point out if I could remember but I\'m tired and sick and should be in bed... so I won\'t even try to remember them.. But I loved hwo Trist got ready for the day! WHEE! nice set of para\'s there..
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no death!!!!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job girl!! Good job!!! Loved the ending to this chapter!!! So suspenseful!! Keep it coming!