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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, Sarah. Just checking in to say hello and keep it coming. Looks like another great fic.
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok... ok... i\'m hooked... for your supposedly \"rough\" \"unedited\" stories these are great... rough draft and all... characters seemed really interesting... so i hope you write more real soon...
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh!! Twists! Me likey! I\'m very glad this one is being updated and not staying a sneak peek! ^_~ Can\'t wait for the next update! And as soon as my AIM is fixed, I\'ll be online to bug you about it! Don\'t suppose you have MSN or YIM....?
Either way, excellent work!
**Zeph**
Either way, excellent work!
**Zeph**
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Trist fascinates me. I want to hear more about him. I like it so far!! Will you be posting more?
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really going to like Trist. Continue with Val\'s story please! I love this stuff!
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May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! Very nice, as usual! I\'m glad this one is taking over! I can\'t wait to read more. I want to know what\'s going on with Trist now! Keep it up! It looks really promising!
((Sorry I haven\'t been on IM lately. My AIM has decided to hate me and not let me sign on. Sowwy! *huggle*))
**Zeph**
((Sorry I haven\'t been on IM lately. My AIM has decided to hate me and not let me sign on. Sowwy! *huggle*))
**Zeph**
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bwee! I\'m so happy you have another story! Even with all the unedited-ness (which is hardly noticeable), it\'s good stuff, your writing. Maybe slightly gary-stu ish but not offensively so. hee, I love that he totally didn\'t know it was a gay bar. Not that I figured it out either. But it\'s interesting to see how you\'ll work with a character that hasn\'t already gone through the \"omg, I\'m gay\" thing in one way or another. and the title\'s intruiging...who\'s telling the lies? what will the lies be? is Val really a woman??? :D
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is off to a great start! The imagery you share is so detailed, making the scene so easy to visualize. I also appreciate how you build the story at a reasonable pace and dont just have the characters falling into bed and admitting eternal love for each other within the first few minutes of meeting. Looking forward to the next update.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy crap, a bad day all around for these guys!! and he didn\'t know!! men can be so unobservant. i\'m excited about this story because i love everything i\'ve read of yours so far. great start!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ such a good start and the spelling is no problem with me you spell better then i do heee. I\'m enjoying the story so far like i enjoyed all of your previous ones :3