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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Sarah - How do you do that? Turn a completely unappealing character into a real doll. I can hardly wait to see Val and Trist get together. Great story. Keep it coming. Thanks!
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love Trist. So very much. I\'m SO glad you decided to write this story.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I gulped this whole thing down. It\'s incredible. Well written. You\'ve managed to make me suspend my disbelief and you are GREAT with characterization.
Update soon. Please.
Update soon. Please.
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I love Trist, he\'s hilarious! Very well done so far, can\'t wait for the next chapter, I\'m excited to see how the weekend turns out :)
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May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There\'s nothing wrong with wanting someone to pet you! Well, unless it\'s heavy petting. I guess that might be wrong. Especially for Trist, since it might put him into psychic overload.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Love it, can\'t wait for you to continue posting. You had me lost for a bit but then after you explained Trist it was all good. Thanks so much for a good story.
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, i\'m glad you put that in there because i actually wanted info on the matt/val relationship. it\'s pretty interesting actually, and now we know why he was drawn to that bar in the first place. trist is turning out to be quite interesting himself. i like how how this is going,but then, i love everything i\'ve read of yours :) great work!
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was the best beginning chapter of ANY story I\'ve ever read! I loved the way you introduced those two. anyway got more chapters to read. ^.^
wuv peaches
wuv peaches
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the relationship Gav has with Trist. It\'s wonderful and portrayed very very well. I\'m loving Trist more and more. Can\'t wait to see what effect he has on Val. This is great Sarah! Keep it up, please!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn girl... this is a thriller .... i hope it ends in a happy lemon tho...hahah