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for The Lies We Tell

by flintywoman

person Lada
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing story!! Trist and Val seems can help each other to overcome the ordeals of their lives! Like your story (well all of them so far) so very much!!
person penguin-woman
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm, i can tell this is gonna be a GREAT sroty...<3
person Jaxx
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
If I\'d been Trist, I wouldn\'t have been able to hold my tongue NEARLY as well. Very nice. I\'ve been waiting for Gav to leave, but at the same time, I don\'t want him to stay away for too long. I love it. Can\'t wait for more!
person sarah jo
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh damn! . . . .I wanna know what Trist thought of all that in the end of that last chapter! oh well guess ill wait, great story by the way and cant wait for more!
peaches
person Flamingolo
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Looks like another smashing fic is in the works! I love Trist, and the angle you\'ve taken with his clairvoyance is a unique and intruiging one. Val is also an interesting, angsty character that only seems to get more fascinating. Looking forward to more, glad to see another fic from you.
person sara
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that last bit awas soo unbelievably CUTE!!! Trist is gorgeous and im glad he behaved! ;)
person Sarah jo
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Damn that was quick, but not un-wanted! oh poor Trist. still Loven the story!
person turtledonkey27
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love you and your story! wow, that was pretty intense with the ring and the books and the bathroom. i feel like i\'ve been sucked into trist\'s mind and sphere along with val, it\'s a little overwhelming. i like how it\'s developing kinda slow here and...oh, i just can\'t think of anything that does it justice, really. i like the whole damn thing, i await updates anxiously. :D great work, as always.
person marimea
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Trist is sooooo mean! XDXD
person Zephyr
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Angstiness! Gotta love Sarcastic!Trist in the middle of the angst. Very nice. I\'m really liking this story.

LOVE the spandex and tank top reference. ^_~ Reminds me of a certain little GW boy we all love to pet. Heehee! Awesome!

**Zeph**