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for The Lies We Tell

by flintywoman

person Zephyr
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot! First kiss! And it was absolutely amazing! I like how Trist settled down and \'played nice\' with Val. Excellent work! I can\'t wait for the next update!

**Zeph**

BTW, apparently my AIM only works when I\'m over at my friend\'s, so....blarg. I\'ll be on when I can! *hugglehuggle* And I rented QaF. You were right. I\'m SO FREAKING HOOKED!! Me liking the B/J!
person Jaxx
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. I liked that alot. Those two will be so much fun. Very sweet and unexpected. And, of course, the obligatory, \"I just adore Trist\". And all that. And again, can\'t wait for more!
person sarah jo
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sqwweeeeeeeeeeeeel!. . . . . ^.^ . . . . . Im pratically drooling. I SO cant wait for when Val and Trist hook up.
peaches
person MR
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I want more soon please!!!!! But you\'re good with updating so I should get what I ant soon. So thank you. You have a gift for creating new worlds that create the desire to be a part of them. Well, as I said I always love to hear more from all your characters.
bye
person Jaxx
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful as always
person Dvana
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ It\'s really nice to read this story. I know that it seems like stating the obvious, but I can think of little that\'s more fun than getting to know these characters. On this chapter specifically, I particularly liked the reading aloud. The near-breakdown seemed a bit rushed, but I can see why you\'d want to hurry though that. Hm. It\'s hard for me to read your writing with a critical eye the first time through, I enjoy it too much! ^^
person tkmowens
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, I like how you twist our expectations. One moment we think Val and Gavin might get together, the next moment we are meeeting Gavin\'s eccentric cousin, who just so happens to be a powerful psychic. I think this story is fabulous.
person Lisn
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww such a cozy ending to the last chapter!! I REALLY REALLY LUV THIS STORY!!
person Lisn
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very GOOD!! I love your endings of chapters!! Their so relaxing and calm!!!! YAY! I LUV THIS STORY!!
person annushka^^
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had decided to wait untill there were more chapters to start reading, but well, I couldn\'t help myself >_< So now, I\'ll be stalking the website everyday to see if you updated, that\'s my fate...
what can I say? it\'s great... I love it!!! The first chapter was incredible, I really liked how you introduced Val, and the cousin... As for Tristan, well, one gets to like him very quickly too despite the 1st impression he might leave... For my part, I\'m rooting for him ^__^ The way the story develops is captivating... so basicly, like I said: I love it and will be looking forward to the coming chapters!!!
I was so happy to read on your website that you would be writing a sequel to \"blurring the lines\", that made my day too ^__^
Thank you for these amazing stories and keep writing ^^