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Wow. That was amazing. So sad and angsty, yet sweet at the same time. I love how you\'re developing Val and Trist\'s relationship. It\'s slow, but every event moves it along. Excellent!

**Zeph**

Hey, I\'m a new fan of yours. Seriously. I found this story first, then looked up your others...I finished Blurring the Lines, and it was great. I\'m too exhausted to read anything else. ^^; You have got to update. *grabs pillow and camps out for next chapter*

i LOOOOOOOOOVE Trist\'s personality! So real...

Wow, things are getting sweet yet steamy. That\'s a hard thing to pull off yet you\'re managing quite nicely.

Aww... I really like this story! Update soon please! Trist and Val are so .. right?

again: so cute! i couldn\'t help but smile awww they\'re both gorgeous!

Okay. You are one of the most talented writers I have encountered here! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I love your characters, they seem so real! I was wondering who you were going to pair up. LOL Hell a threesome would have worked for me! Please post again as soon as you can, I am always eager to read more! BTW, your writing is smooth and transitions excellent, I feel like I\'m being gently brought along. Lovely! It amazes me how your story is concise yet nothing seems to be missing. You are effective in telling a story without the fluff. I\'m impressed and wish I could write so well. I\'m too verbose! Thank you again for sharing your gift.

Oh God. I want the next chapter so very badly. I want them to be all snuggled up together again. I like Lisa. And I\'m liking Val more and more. Very nicely done!

Good god! I read ten chapters of this and all of \"Blurring the Lines\" in one day! I love them! They are really fantastic and I hope you continue to write more! Damn, I need to get some eye drops because my eyes are stinging. It is definatly worth the pain to read them.

“Okay.” Val sighed as his birthday officially started as the clock rolled past midnight. “I might be gay.”

After all that denial, that line just made me laugh my ass off! And Trist\'s little \'good night kiss\'. Damn! I\'m totally hooked on this story! Great job, as usual!

**Zeph**