rate_review Reviews

YOU ARE SO VERY EXCELLENT!!! I absolutely loved this last chapter. You\'ve got me so addicted to this fic, that I\'m constantly checking to see when it\'s been updated. Wonderfully written, great story line, lovable characters, and excellent flow! What more could I ask for?! I\'m so very glad that their sexual tension has finally been released, and hope they get more opportunities in the future. I love it, I love it, I love it! What the heck, I\'m gonna say it one more time. I LOVE IT! Excitedly awaiting more soon!

holy crap that was good. i\'m breathless :) thank you, i\'m going to try to go to sleep now...yeah right, not with those pictures in my head. wow. wow. really, wow. heh. cigarette?

Yea! Books for Val! I thought that was lovely. A perfect girft for him. Not to mention what I\'m sure will come next chapter! And I really love the idea that the books chose him. That was a nice touch. Great chapter!

Don\'t think I have reviewed before...shame on me! *g*

You know, this story is one of the quieter ones that you tend to overlook when browsing for some nc-17 and not finding any sex in the first couple of chapters. But I have to tell you that I am very much liking it, because it is a \'quiet\' story. It meanders along, introducing the characters, giving hints of something very big going on in the background with Val\'s live and all the while there is this subtle sexual tension between Trist and Val. The writing is very good and the plot develops at just the right pace.

Keep on writing!

*turns red*

Hehe...I also just noticed you are the writer of \"Blurring the lines\' with the lovely Toshi and Mick...I finished reading that one on your site...hmmm, I still have the link to your site in my \'Favorites\' file *g*

perfect... that last chapter was just perfect... poor Val he stands no chance against Trist... update soon... please

Oh you and Alice in Wonderland! I love Eshe. She really brings a lot of depth to the story, and I hope we get to see more of her! This was really a well written chapter, if short. Of course, the long weekend and all, I\'m sure no one holds it against you. Lovely as always Sarah!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Trist is sooooo evil!!! Poor Val doesn\'t have a clue...
im sure hes not going to protest too much though!!! update soon ;)

Awww! Poor Val, he\'s really stuck in denial here! But he\'s adorable, so we\'ll let him get away with it. And Trist is absolutely wonderful. Great job on the story so far, especially incorporating fact and fantasy and your characters, as always, are beautifully delineated. Keep up the great work and update soon, please?
~JABberwocky

It is so good to know that Tris has a plan how to seduce Val:-) Val certainly needs it, needs to relax, to feel loved again! And Trist as well. But I can\'t help but worry about what Ashe predicted, something dark brewing, very much scary thing!

Wonderful chapter so far as well as whole story line!!!