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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love I love I love!!!! Ah, you are so talented!! Lovely job, fantastical job!! By far, this is one of the best stories I\'ve had the pleasure of reading :) Absolutley Great!! I can\'t wait until you update!!
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God, that was one of the best sex scenes, I think you\'ve ever written. And you put Matt there. Good. It worked out well. Also, Val\'s reaction to his books: Adorable and beautiful. Exactly what he needed, books, cake and Trist. Val holding the others at bay? That will be interesting for Gav to find out. Now, I\'m sort of excited for him to come back. This was beautiful Sarah! Absolutely beautiful! Very VERY well done!
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not what I was expecting, not that its a bad thing. . . . .definatily not a bad thing! I dont know what to say to such an amazing chapter, other then that was a very good job. cant wait for the morning. Wonder whats next.
peaches
peaches
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW - you are an amazing author. I love your story; the plot is brilliant, and the sex scene was HOT. Keep up the awesome work; I can\'t wait to read more!
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was worth waiting for. So hot. I wish I could write lemon half that hot. I bow to your lemon writing ability.
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
<3 your smuttyness thank you for a wonderful chapter.
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was amazing! A good touch that Matt was encouraging Trist and telling him what to do, oh and REALLY intersting that Val was the one blocking the other voices!!! So hes more powerful than we thought..hmmm ;)
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl! *fans self* Can we say hot? Especially that little touch of voyeurism thrown in. I think I\'m gonna need a cold shower after that one. LOL ^_^
Excellent chapter! And not just for the lemon, either. I really liked how Matt was a part of it. It helped clear up a few of the shadows of the past. Great job!
**Zeph**
Excellent chapter! And not just for the lemon, either. I really liked how Matt was a part of it. It helped clear up a few of the shadows of the past. Great job!
**Zeph**
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter with all this growing sexual tension and long-awaited and wonderful release!!! Like it so very much! And I hope that they will have one night and another and another and many more wonderful nights of love-making and happiness together!!!!:-)
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck. <3