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(“Day one, operation crack Val open, mission accepted.” He grinned and wondered if he owned black spandex shorts and a green tank top.)

Okay, first Kurosawa, and now Gundam Wing?? I\'m only on chapter six, but this story is fsking unbelievable!! I love it sooooo much! *Gushes as only a skilled fangirl can gush*

I\'m incredibly obsessed with the Gundam Wing fandom, and everybody likes a little yaoi/slash every now and then, so I wonder if you have heard of gwaddiction? It\'s an excellent fanfiction site, though your regular fiction is doing awesome on it\'s own. ^____^

Awwwwwww! *reaches for a Kleenex* That was so heart wrenching. Both of them, trying to deny what they feel. Wonderfully well written, as usual! I can\'t wait for the next update. You could do so much with this, I can\'t wait to see where your imagination takes it!

**Zeph**

And the plot thickens! ^_~ Great update, as usual! I love how you can make the stories last and not have them be in the least bit tedious. And I still can\'t wait to see what happens with Val and Trist. That was such a sad part of the story! They\'re so good together. I\'ll definitely be watching for the next update!

**Zeph**

Wonderful story! You are a fantastic author. I love where you\'ve taken this story and I can\'t wait to read more. I hope that you are feeling better soon and that everything works out okay. Best of luck with everything... ^_^

I stayed up all night last night reading this story! So great. =)

You don\'t suck! Poor Trist! I hope he and Val get to have at least one more night together. Hell, I don\'t care if it\'s a morning, or an afternoon, or in PUBLIC for pete\'s sake! Just at least one more time. Trist took it better than I would have thought. Good chapter!

Hi Sarah,

I\'m glad, you are back. I was a bit worried. I hope you are better now. Just wanted to tell you that I\'m finished with rereading Blur and I\'ll work an my review the next few days. Nothing to worry about though. No dislike points, just a few questions and a lot of little details I really liked. I hope I\'ll get it done by Wednesday next week.
About Lies... I love Trist, his twisted personality, the fact that he is always good for a surprise, that he is not shy to take what he wants. I absolutely loved how you involved Matt in chapter 16 *lol*.
The only thing I don\'t like about Trist is that he clings to this \"one time thing\". Stupid boy. Yeah, I know why he is doing it, but I can\'t help, while reading it, I had to think about Star Wars III and Anakins dream that just became true because of him becoming a Sith Lord ^^
Make sure he gets a grip or I\'ll kick him in his scrawny ass *rofl*

*hugs*

I love your story by far!!! Your ability to pull the reader into your characters is beyond excellent!! I cannot wait for more!

In the beginning, I didn\'t picture Val as the uke nor Trist as the seme. But I tell ya, after this chap, not only can I see that, I\'d like to possibly see a threesome (yay!) between Gavan, Val, and Trist. If Gavan and Val are like equals, they could switch roles with each other. But then, I dunno about the cousin ick factor....how far removed are they from each other in the family tree? Maybe far enough it would be ok, farther away even than \"kissing cousins\"? hmm... Then again, the three could be together with the cousins never doing anything with each other, always Val as a buffer/middle. All three deserve some love. :^D

Oh, Sarah -- I\'m so glad you\'re back. I was really beginning to worry about you. I\'m sorry that you have been ill. It\'s good to have you writing again. I love this story and can\'t wait to see what happens next.