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for The Lies We Tell

by flintywoman

person Zephyr
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*hugglehuggle* I hope everything works out for you. I know how it feels when a pet dies. I\'ll be online if you need someone to talk to, hon. *huggles more*

**Zeph**
person Jukebox
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bless your heart. So sorry about your pet. It\'s hard when our loving furry companions pass.
person Sara
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, poor you! Hope you feel better soon! Don\'t worry about posting, take your time. Chapter was great, as always ;)
person SignsofDeath
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. That is really all I have to say. I litteraly get on this sight every night praying to god that you have uploaded another chapter...okay yes that sounds creepy but I mean it in the most non-creepy way possible. Keep writing because you are so very good at it!
person Lada
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Does it mean that Gavan got shut instead of Val not like Trist saw it in his dream? Very interesting! Eagerly waiting for every update!!!! Love the story so very much!
person Zephyr
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOOOOOOH!! Twists!! I love it!

You know, my heart almost stopped when it got to the phone call. Wow. And now...I\'m on pins and needles. I wanna know what happened to Trist! And Gavan! And who shot them. And why. And what Val\'s going to do! And...*breathes* Okay. What I\'m getting at is we need an update, and soon!

Excellent plot twist!

**Zeph**
person niapri
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh...awesome chapter; I can\'t wait for the next update! *camps out*
person Sara
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! This was sooo unexpected!! Glad you\'re keeping us readers on our toes!!
person annushka^^
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaargh! You\'re so evil! Poor trist >__<# Like everyone else, I\'ll be looking forward to your next update (like everyday... I\'m so addicted...) ^^;;;;
That\'s quite extraordinary, everytime I think that I know what might happen in the next chapter, you have me surprised by some kind of twist. Keep up with the awsome work ^__^
person annushka^^
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaargh! You\'re so evil! Poor trist!!! Like everyone else, I\'ll be looking forward to your next update (like everyday... I\'m so addicted...) ^^;;;;
That\'s quite extraordinary, everytime I think that I know what might happen in the next chapter, you have me surprised by some kind of twist. Keep up with the awsome work ^__^