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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow - that is some cloak & dagger stuff with the shadowy govt org and terrorists connections and stuff. I was thinking at first that the brother-in-law was working undercover for the govt as maybe a spy or something, investigating groups. Now I\'m not so sure.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was great to read your update. I love your characters, they are endearing! Your story telling is addicting and I can\'t wait for your next update. I hope everything is going well for you and I\'m looking forward to reading more of your story.
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Wow. What a twist!! That was TOTALLY unexpected. At least on my part. Love it! I definitely can\'t wait to see where you\'re going with this!! Keep it up!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story\'s kinda losing my interest. You\'ve turned Val into the \"typical uke\" character, all weak and too submissive. Hopefully you\'ll pick back up on the plot soon. You write really well and it started off strong, but it just seems you might be losing track a little. *shrugs*
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay update! I think it\'s cool how Val is somehow silencing the voices in Trist\'s head whenever they are sexual with each other. That gives hope that Gavan might possibly be able to have his own life now apart from his cousin. Looking forward to seeing Gavan get out of the hospital and also what happened to Val\'s sister and her kids. Keep up the great work!
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is such a good story and i love how it is slowly progressing. Update soon!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
With every single chapter you never cease to amaze me. Thank you. Keep going.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so intense! I\'ve been forceing myself to wait a while to check on this story so I have a chunk to read, because I just can\'t stand reading only one chapter at a time... I\'m stunned by the whole shooting thing. I feel so protective of Trist! I\'m dying to know if what happened to him and Gavan is somehow related to something... ack...
As for the last chapter, totally wonderful. I can\'t wait for the next one!
As for the last chapter, totally wonderful. I can\'t wait for the next one!
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...I\'ve lurked ever since I found this story, and I think I found it when you posted chapter 19. Anyway. Irrelevant. You rock. You\'ve made me cry, laugh, smile, and sometimes even just stare in absolute shock. I just figured I should take the time to let you know that you\'re awesome. This fic is one that I adore now, and yeah...an author\'s efforts shouldn\'t go unappreciated. Onwards! No complaints from this corner.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter! The emotion was so raw and the way you\'ve written it is simply heart-wrenching.
In love with you? Me? ;)
In love with you? Me? ;)