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Wow! I wonder if the cops after Trist have any connection to the group that\'s after the cd? Exciting, I\'m waiting on the edge of my seat!

YOU MADE ME CRY!!! OMG this is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good i swear it just keeps getting better and better.

ooh, cool. awful, but very cool. so glad you updated--love ALL your stories and this is the best so far! on the edge of my seat here :)

i can\'t wait.. we need more!

I hope this isn\'t going where it looks like it\'s going. I\'m a military brat. I already have enough REAL reason to despise all things government/political, I don\'t need a literary one too! Got enough real reasons to depise all things corporate too. Could this be a union thing? I don\'t have any reasons to depsise unions yet.

Hand-breaking is so old school torture. You\'d think bad guys would come up with something new by now, but I guess if it works...

Violet and Valentine. I love that combo of names. It\'s better than Romeo and Juliet.

No one can build a plot like you can! That was such an amazing twist! Never would\'ve thought it was something Val had that they were after! Excellent! I can\'t wait to see where this one goes now!

**Zeph**

Excellent new chappies! You always have a way of making me think you\'ll go in one direction, and then veering off with new twists, and I love it. Liking the dynamic between Trist and Val, and how Trist\'s \'weaknesses\' help Val open up bit by bit. Lol, but what choice does one really have with a psychic?

32, a lovely chapter. So glad to see this posting, You really spoiled me with daily posts thee for a while. I start to go into withdraw...One tiny, tiny thing: in the paragraph where Val is hovering outside Trist\'s apartment, in that first line, Val is afraid to see what \"awaits\" him not what \"awakes\" him, I think. Keep to good stuff flowing. You help me though my days.

Alright, I wish I have an account here so I can save it as my favorite story. Or you have this story up in fictionpress.com. Because it\'s wonderful. I love it. The sex scene was bittersweet, because there was Matt, and he\'s actually asking Trist to seduce Val, and it\'s wonderful because it\'s like Matt had always wanted Val to be happy.

The bit about the mysterious \'accidental\' death surrounding Val\'s sister\'s death was wonderful. Because it added an air of mystery about the whole place, including the psychic sight of Trist and the fortune telling Eshe. I\'m reviewing here only because I can\'t help myself. I -have- to tell you it\'s a wonderful story.

Now on to the next chapter.

Alright, I wish I have an account here so I can save it as my favorite story. Or you have this story up in fictionpress.com. Because it\'s wonderful. I love it. The sex scene was bittersweet, because there was Matt, and he\'s actually asking Trist to seduce Val, and it\'s wonderful because it\'s like Matt had always wanted Val to be happy.

The bit about the mysterious \'accidental\' death surrounding Val\'s sister\'s death was wonderful. Because it added an air of mystery about the whole place, including the psychic sight of Trist and the fortune telling Eshe. I\'m reviewing here only because I can\'t help myself. I -have- to tell you it\'s a wonderful story.

Now on to the next chapter.

PS. If there\'s two of these reviews, my apologies. Somehow, the stupid connection wouldn\'t let me post it properly. >>;