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very good story keep going and post soon
bye bye

i think your story is good. something i did wonder about, & maybe you said & i just missed it, what exactly does Ivan look like, besides his eyes? what is so special about his hair, other than Chiku liking it? also, what does Chiku look like, besides having black waist-length hair & eyes? anyway, please carry on with your story!

no don\'t let it end here.more please ,it is very good.

Awesome! Hehe, we\'ll see how mine turns out! Hehe

Awwww!!! That\'s sweet! Um, I find no problems with it actually. You did a cool one Val! Maybe you should do more stories concerning those from our RPG.