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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew Eddy had a crush on Lianna. Call me stupid but I still like joey and Lianna together. Everyone else reviewing this probably doesn\'t want them together. I\'m just like this. I\'m glad Madison, Tavien, and Eddy are there for Lianna. I just hope Joseph isn\'t a jerk when he comes back from where he\'s going for his tour. You are as usual doing a fabulous job. keep up the great work and update soon.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, just as I was wanting to shake Lianna and scream at her that she\'s so incredibly BLIND to the fact that Eddie likes her, Vicky beats me to the punch ^_^ Awesome.
I think the thing that I like the most about this chapter is that I\'m sitting here crying my eyes out during Joseph\'s little speech, crying while Lianna\'s at the condo, and then laughing hysterically at Tavian\'s comment about Tom Cruise and how he doesn\'t know that the beginning of football is called the kickoff. I also like how this chapter finished lightly with Madison and Tavian...gave me time to collect myself before I reviewed ^_^
So, I think after Joseph\'s little speech I like him again. But I still think Lianna did the right thing. Perhaps they can get back together later after she sorts herself out...and, if they do, hopefully Joseph will not be so self-centered.
Also, I think that the fact that you have managed to make me write reviews about your characters as if they were real people shows how great an author you are! ^_^ I have a feeling there are only a few more chapters left, which saddens me and excites me all at the same time. Can\'t wait for more!
I think the thing that I like the most about this chapter is that I\'m sitting here crying my eyes out during Joseph\'s little speech, crying while Lianna\'s at the condo, and then laughing hysterically at Tavian\'s comment about Tom Cruise and how he doesn\'t know that the beginning of football is called the kickoff. I also like how this chapter finished lightly with Madison and Tavian...gave me time to collect myself before I reviewed ^_^
So, I think after Joseph\'s little speech I like him again. But I still think Lianna did the right thing. Perhaps they can get back together later after she sorts herself out...and, if they do, hopefully Joseph will not be so self-centered.
Also, I think that the fact that you have managed to make me write reviews about your characters as if they were real people shows how great an author you are! ^_^ I have a feeling there are only a few more chapters left, which saddens me and excites me all at the same time. Can\'t wait for more!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD!!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEEE UPDATE ANOTHER CHAPTER SOON!!!!!!!!!!! VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!! RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OH PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????? IM DYING HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I FEEL SO BAD FOR JOSEPH!!!!!!!!!...:( I WISH THEY WOULD GET BACK TOGETHER AGAIN BUT WHAT HE DID WAS TOTALLY UNFORGIVABLE!!!!!!!!!!!! I WANT HIM TO SUFFER FIRST!!!!!!!!!!! HEHEHEHEHEHEHE... AND I REALLY HOPE SHE AND EDDIE COULD GET TOGETHER... SO JOSEPH COULD GET REALLY PISSED OFF AND JEALOUS AND HEART BROKEN... THAT\'LL TEACH HIM... EVEN IF HE IS SOOOOOOO CUTE!!!!!!!! EVEN I CANT RESIST HIM!!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEE!!!!!!!!! I CANT STAND WAITING SO YOU BETTER UPDATE OR ILL KILL MYSELF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BTW THAT WASNT A THREAT IT WAS A UNFRIENDLY SUGGESTION!!!!!!!!!! TEEHEEHEE!!!!!!... NO REALLY... UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS LITERALLY THE BEST FANFIC IVE EVER READ UP TILL NOW!!!!!!! AND THATS REALLY SUMTHIN... BECAUSE IVE READ OVER AROUND 200 FANFICS... THAT JUST PROVES I HAVE NO LIFE AND I SIT GOING THROUGH AFF ALL DAY LONG AND READ STORIES THAT I FIND INTERESTING... HOW SAD... ANYWHO... UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!! IM WAITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god no, the angst...*sigh* make him grovel, make him pine away, make him write her a song, make her pregnant.... please let the story go on .. and on .. and on - okay you get the point. And the whole Eddie having feelings for her making things weird for Lianna is completely understandable. When you find out a friend feels way different than you thought they did about you...it feels like a betrayal for a while cuz all of a sudden you start questioning everything they do and what their intentions are behind everything. It makes you nervous and paranoid and I love how you are portraying that angle. Subtle but effective and I hope to see more. Angst and all!
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice post. Chapter 15 was very profond. Now I can\'t wait to see how will you will get them together again. You are doing that right?
P.S: I like your story not because it is the Cinderella modern type of story but because it is human. Continue hard work. YOu are doing great.
P.S: I like your story not because it is the Cinderella modern type of story but because it is human. Continue hard work. YOu are doing great.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh...and I hope Frankie continues the bitch fest towards Lianna and Joseph snaps and fires her. In public. Big scene....much drama. hhehehehhe (I\'m not vindictive...really I\'m not. -- Okay well maybe a little)
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lianna’s good memories of Joseph seem to override the bad incident. She is a woman who is in love and I don’t think she is weak if she wants to give Joseph a second chance. I think they just moved a little too fast the first time. I wonder what Frankie thinks of her name being in the paper. This chapter was not boring at all. I especially like reading the part of Lianna’s memories of Joseph. Hey, nice title for this chapter. Thanks for updating.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
once again, amazing...great job on this story so far...by the way, i want Lianna to end up with Joseph and i hope Frankie gets a well-deserved punishment/horrible event happen to her
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to clarify things for the other reviewers...Lianna isn\'t moving in with Eddie. The apartment offered to her by him was one that HIS FRIEND is giving up.
Mmkay, personally, I think Lianna is being stupid defending Joseph. He FUCKED UP and people are going to say things that \"make her feel uncomfortable\" but it\'s the truth, so I totally cheer Eddie on for getting irritated by her weakened resolve. Maybe it\'s just because I don\'t give second chances myself, but I\'m really starting to hate Lianna. I think she\'s being idiotic about the whole thing, but then again, I\'m just cynical.
That being said, I think Joseph and Lianna should work things out. She\'s in an emotional spot right now (which seems way too dramatic for me) but considering the options, I suppose Joseph would be the better choice. Eddie\'s a nice guy, but the vibe between those two seems off, and I don\'t think Lianna could handle being \"herself by herself\" again. Sure, she was a confident, single young woman before, but falling in love has changed that, and I don\'t think Lianna can be stable by herself anymore. I think she\'s always going to need someone in her life to depend on and Joseph is probably going to be the one to do that.
The thing that angers me about Lianna is this...she\'s weak. Like emotionally weak. Like Madison said, she\'s become a shell of her former self. She stood up to Joseph because he treated her like CRAP and he went and slept with a hated enemy and she\'s trying to resolve everything because she\'s afraid to lose him. Why? Because she can\'t be alone, sure she loves him, but if she doesn\'t believe he loves her as much as she loves him, why would she bother to try to continue things with him knowing that she probably won\'t be satisfied? Because she can\'t be alone. Don\'t get me wrong, I understand that breaking up with someone you love is a tremendous thing, but breaking up because he compromised your TRUST and DISRESPECTED you, but still through all that deciding to stay with him is not my idea of a strong, independent woman. I think Lianna\'s lost all love for herself if she\'s willing to let a man do that and get away with it. And on top of that, she\'s defending his actions from her BEST FRIEND who has known her and been there for her. That\'s a sign that she doesn\'t respect herself.
But despite all that, just because I can\'t see Lianna ever gaining back her self respect, I see her realigning herself with Joseph.
This is just my opinion, I hope I haven\'t offended you, but if I have it can\'t be helped.
Good job with the story.
Happy writing.
Mmkay, personally, I think Lianna is being stupid defending Joseph. He FUCKED UP and people are going to say things that \"make her feel uncomfortable\" but it\'s the truth, so I totally cheer Eddie on for getting irritated by her weakened resolve. Maybe it\'s just because I don\'t give second chances myself, but I\'m really starting to hate Lianna. I think she\'s being idiotic about the whole thing, but then again, I\'m just cynical.
That being said, I think Joseph and Lianna should work things out. She\'s in an emotional spot right now (which seems way too dramatic for me) but considering the options, I suppose Joseph would be the better choice. Eddie\'s a nice guy, but the vibe between those two seems off, and I don\'t think Lianna could handle being \"herself by herself\" again. Sure, she was a confident, single young woman before, but falling in love has changed that, and I don\'t think Lianna can be stable by herself anymore. I think she\'s always going to need someone in her life to depend on and Joseph is probably going to be the one to do that.
The thing that angers me about Lianna is this...she\'s weak. Like emotionally weak. Like Madison said, she\'s become a shell of her former self. She stood up to Joseph because he treated her like CRAP and he went and slept with a hated enemy and she\'s trying to resolve everything because she\'s afraid to lose him. Why? Because she can\'t be alone, sure she loves him, but if she doesn\'t believe he loves her as much as she loves him, why would she bother to try to continue things with him knowing that she probably won\'t be satisfied? Because she can\'t be alone. Don\'t get me wrong, I understand that breaking up with someone you love is a tremendous thing, but breaking up because he compromised your TRUST and DISRESPECTED you, but still through all that deciding to stay with him is not my idea of a strong, independent woman. I think Lianna\'s lost all love for herself if she\'s willing to let a man do that and get away with it. And on top of that, she\'s defending his actions from her BEST FRIEND who has known her and been there for her. That\'s a sign that she doesn\'t respect herself.
But despite all that, just because I can\'t see Lianna ever gaining back her self respect, I see her realigning herself with Joseph.
This is just my opinion, I hope I haven\'t offended you, but if I have it can\'t be helped.
Good job with the story.
Happy writing.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, another powerful, amazing chapter. I really want her with Joseph...I don\'t know, I just want those to together, I know things can be worked out in some relationships and I\'m hoping Joseph and Lianna will be able to do that. But either way, it\'s a great story. Please keep up the great work!