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Another amazing chapter. I\'m glad you had it focus a lot on her and Eddie, getting ground on them, but it was also sweet of Joseph to call her like that and wish her a happy birthday. He does have a thoughtful sweet side to him. hehe. Can\'t wait to see what \"the future holds\" for those two and I also am looking forward to seeing where Eddie and Liana are headed with their friendship. Great writing! Can\'t wait for more!!

*Sniff* Oh you did it again! Are you trying to make me cry at each chapter here?
Oh how difficult, especially now that we see Joseph\'s honestly sincere about it all! Please say that they are gonna work it all out in the end, even if a little time away is all they need. I\'m a sucker for sweet endings, though mixed with the right amount of heartache.

And could like, Madison meet Frankie at some club somewhere and clobber her in the ladies room for Li\'s sake?

Update soon! Can\'t wait!

I have come to the conclusion that you\'re a merciless tease!


Talk about being on tenderhooks, keep it up! This is your best, most realistically formed piece to date, the characters are wonderful, and just so you know, I\'m rooting for Joseph!


Take a bow Tirch, you\'re doing great!

Ohhhh I love how you keep this story going! and I know how Lianna\'s getting over her breakup, but she\'s being a bit too mopey...she needs to get out there. I have no sympathy for joey because he\'s too late and gah! Eddie\'s cute, but I have no idea how this is gonna turn out which is really exciting. Please update soon!
-G

I have been waiting what feels like months for this chapter, so you can imagine how stoked I was this morning to find that you had posted. But, I have to say I\'m a little sad that Lianna dumped Joseph for good. I mean I can\'t hardly blame her. I don\'t think I could get over the Frankie thing myself. Lianna and Joseph had heat, so I\'m going to hope that she has a change of heart. I think this was a good chapter, and I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Ahh, a good chapter. Not a whole lot to say, except for one thing: Something has to happen with Joseph soon, otherwise the story would be over;) Dont end the story, or I will hunt you down... and duck tape you to a chair until you produce more and more chapters to my liking*grins* Im not that evil, but dont push your luck. Keep up the good work.

Nice chapter... glad to see she\'s getting herself together. I don\'t really care who she ends up with, so I\'m reading your story with interest. I do want her to end up happy though, and she can\'t do that until she finds her own centre. Hoping to see one or two chapters where she puts herself back together and can deal with the world again. It\'s great that she has friends who are there for her, but she can\'t lean on them for too long. Good luck Lianna! (As an aside, if whe _doesn\'t_ end up with Joeseph, what do people thing should happen to him?)

What a heart breaking chapter! It seems we finally did find out that Eddie liked her more than just a friend, but thats good because Lianna needed to know that. Maybe she can watch out for him now because I despretly don\'t want them together. I am still hoping with everything in my soul that Lianna and Joseph can somehow be back together. I hope it doesn\'t end like this, really. I have a feeling that Lianna is going to figure out what she left and try and get it back, that goes for Joesph too. So what if he is on tour, so what if he slept with Frankie. All of us know Frankie is a bitch that probably did that intentionally to hurt Lianna. Real love finds ways to get past obsticles like this. I am hoping they, both, figure out that too.

I am really glad that Tavian and Madison have found love in one another. Tavian is such a great guy. Madison is a great girl. They go together like peanut butter and jelly. lol. While I am greatly happy for both of those too I can\'t help grieving over Joseph and Liannas\' loss of love. I could easily see them with one another until the end. I have faith that they will realize what they have lost.

I hope that this isn\'t the end for Lianna and Joseph.

Awaiting the next chapter.

Kali

P.S. I hope that it ends happily/

I really am enjoying this story. When will there be more?

Awe, how sad. I feel bad for Joesph but Liana\'s got to take a stand as her own and do what\'s right for her. It\'s still an awesome story but I feel bad for both of them. Congrats on the big 100! Yay! Keep up your excellent work!