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for Like a Dream Come True

by Tirch

person cukid9
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, I\'m reviewing late...but you\'ll just have to forgive me ^_^

Totally stoked to know that the last chapters are in the works! I can\'t wait to see how this turns out! Poor Eddie. I really like him. I don\'t necessarily think that him and Lianna should get together...I just like him ^_^ I really enjoyed this chapter. It just showed, once again, how nice a guy Eddie is. But I was thrilled to see that Joseph called! Good boy! I really do hope that things work out between Lianna and Joseph.

So, since I read this, like, days after you posted, I hopefully won\'t have to wait as long for the update!

Excellant chapter!
person Nikku
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lianna and Eddy are not a good couple. I mean they just don\'t seem right for each other. Now Joseph and Lianna are way cute. Lol, I don\'t even know why I\'m saying that. Everyone in the story seems to think Eddy and Lianna are cute together, so I hope that doesn\'t mean they\'ll be together. But then tehre was Lianna asking jospeh to call her in a few days which could mean they\'ll get back together, which I really hope they do. Neways, keep up the great work and update soon.
person afici0nada
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please please please don\'t turn this into one of those stories where the girl falls in love with a famous/rich/handsome/perfect guy, but then ends up with her sweet childhood best friend in the end. :P Hehehehe... I mean, it\'s... well, cute, I guess. But once in a while, it\'s nice to hear that fairytales do come true. :P

That being said, I think you\'re a wonderful writer, and that you can really make your characters come alive. :) Here\'s to hoping you update soon!
person Kali
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I think Eddie has finally figured out that Lianna can\'t be with him, no matter how much he wants her. In a way I will always think that Lianna and Joseph will always love eachother. I don\'t think that Lianna is ever supposed to get over Joseph. I think they were ment to be. Yes they have issues, yes they need to work them out but love conqures all right? I hope it does. I have a feeling that Eddie is going to find that right person, he just needs to give it time. I know that I have always basically bashed Eddie because he likes Lianna but now I kind of feel bad for the guy. Liking someone that way and not having them like you like that back always hurts. Eddie just needs time. And I know also, that that is very hypocritical of me because I also said Lianna needs time, and if I didn\'t say it then I\'m thinking it now. But like I said before, I don\'t think Lianna is supposed to get over Joseph. I am glad that Eddie didn\'t try anything on Lianna while she was drunk, if he did, I would actually try and track Eddie down. But I think that both Eddie and Lianna should treasure their friendship because Eddie is such a sincere, nice guy. I don\'t like her boss, Sandy, yes it might be the alcohol but she assumed that they were together, and I hate it when people assume things without knowing all of it. Sandy... I just don\'t know what to say about her, I just have a bad feeling like she is going to sell out Lianna or something... As always I love Madison and Tavian and their playful/humorus nature, it really adds to the story. I am really glad that Joseph called Lianna. It shows that he was thinking about her as much as she was thinking about him. I am praying they can talk this over and have a happy ending after all. Thanks for the shoutout at the beginning of the chapter, it really made me think about it even more and your story is already plauging me! Lol.

Waiting to see what you have in store for them.

Kali
person Southern
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know i have not been a constant reviewer on this particular series but the reason for that would be that it was today that I came across this particular story. Now in one sitting I have just read all 16 chapters to this very intriguing story. I\'m sure that you have gotten many many reviews on who people think should end up with whom in this story but I just wanted to say that to me this is and has been a story about Lianna and Joseph not Lee and Eddie and not just her by herself. I\'m a firm believer in second chances and I know that what happened with Frankie is heinous and horrible but have I really been sitting here all day reading about the chemistry and love between Lianna and Joseph all for her to end up by herself or with Eddie?!? Theres no way I can tell you how to finish or write your story so by no means was that my intention because if I had been the writer the story would not be even half as good or addicting as it is but see the jusitice woman!! (just being melodramatic). But I would like to request that whether she ends up with Eddie or with Joseph(or by herself I guess) can you please write a follow-up story for the guy that gets his heart broken in the end.. it only seems fitting..orrr you could write a multiple ending like a click here for who you want her to be with.. either way I want you to know that this story has been such a good read and I\'m sure you dont want to upset any readers with how you choose to end it so I applaud you on the awesome piece of lit you have written here no matter how you so choose to end it. Bravo!
~Southern
P.S. I also sent a copy of this to you email incase you didnt see it on the review(hope thats ok)
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay.... well it\'s becoming apparent where this is heading. It might have been fun for Lianna to \"jump Eddie\'s bones\" as Sandy put it, just for fun, but it might not have been in character... will you write Eddie\'s story one day too? Joeseph\'s possibly jealous at this point - will he try and win her back, or do something stupid?

Good chapter. Thanks for writing this.
person Lady Rain
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, what a birthday party! Mine were never that cool. Intoxicated, yes, but cool no.

But man then Joseph had to call. Granted I\'m glad he did, though a little sad it was because of a ticket he was signing at that moment. But still, he gets props for not taking the wimps way out, making up excuses for not calling.

Oh poor Eddie. Though I think he and Lianna are great together as best friends, every woman needs one of him, I still feel for the guy. But at least he\'s being so totally great about the whole thing. I just hope nothing happens to mess it all up.

And only four chaps left to enjoy until this comes to a final close and end? *sniff* Alright. But it had better be a happy one. With Frankie getting what she totally deserves.
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 15 and 16 was kind of bittersweet. And what Joseph said to Lianna in chapter 15 was touching. I appreciate you not having Lianna get together with another character just to despite Joseph. Madison makes me laugh. I still hope Lianna and Joseph will give it another go. Thanks for updating.
person Cariad
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i\'m glad Joseph called. It shows some commitment, doesn\'t it? Of course I\'m sorry for Eddie, but then I\'ve never wanted him to have Liana in the first place. Where I\'m afraid though is when L says she can\'t get pass the fact that J slept with Frankie. Could it mean that J will have to make a choice between his manager and his girlfriend, or will L be able to bear the bitch in the end
person Memory Chase
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God.....I feel for Eddie, I really do, but there is just something about Joseph that makes me want to root for him. I mean they obviously love each other. I can\'t wait to find out what happens. I love this story.

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