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this is really good...haha just get rid of frankie...that bitch is evil land a coke whore

Nice chapter. I\'m really pissed off with her boss though. Why had she had to answer the reporter\'s questions in the first place?

But Joseph seems more mature now, thinking of how she can feel, and not only about himself. I really lie Eddie so I\'m a littel sad he can\'t have Lianna, but she\'s not for him, someone was there first. I hope you\'ll fin him someone nice in a future story ;-)

So, Joseph is slowly but surely working his way back into my good graces ^_^

I think this was a good chapter. It provided us with more of an insight into Lianna and Eddie\'s relationship, was an opprotunity for Joseph to score mad points ^_^, and gave us a view of the people that Lianna has around her (oooo, I could just KILL her boss! Telling personal stuff about Lianna to the paper, how could she?!).

I\'m excited there will be a resolution to this soon. I feel like I\'ve been on an emotional rollercoaster since the first chapter. I hope Frankie gets what\'s coming to her (Sandy too for that matter), hope Madison and Tavian have mad babies (not really, but that would be funny), hope Eddie finds himself a nice girl (I still love him ^_^), and I hope that Lianna finds herself and finds happiness. If she can\'t live \"happily ever after\" with Joseph, I think I would be okay with that...maybe ^_^

I don\'t think this chapter was crappy. I can\'t wait to see how this story ends.

UPDATE NOW!

I liked this chap!! Not that I haven\'t liked the others but you know...

Gosh, okay now I\'m not all worried about Eddie, but dern that boss lady. Why\'d she have to go and botch things up like that. She\'s almost an executive version of Frankie, oh freaky thought, who\'s on Lianna\'s side. But nowhere near that evil. so she\'s still redeemably likeable.

But yay, Joseph pulled through!! He knew better and fixed it right away and he\'s totally put Frankie to the curb where she belongs. Too bad the rest of the band can\'t hate her as much, then they could hire a new manager, one with better class and prowess than her.

But oh I can\'t wait for the next chap! Bring it on!

I thought this was a great chapter. Joseph has kind of redeemed himself in this chapter. I no longer have the overwhelming urge to castrate him. He\'s starting to show that softer side that we were all so drawn to in the beginning. Hopefully he\'ll continue to tap into that humble and vulnerable personality in the future, for the sake of their relationship. Lets face it, arrogant asshole Joseph isn\'t what any of us would hope to wind up with.

Still hate Frankie though. Even though she wasn\'t in this chapter. All this crap is her fault, and I hope she pays big time in the next chapter. I\'d really like to see Lianna publicly humiliate her.

Now on to Eddie. Can\'t quite figure him out. All I know is that he creeps me out and is really starting to get on my nerves. But, don\'t take this the wrong way, \'cause I believe that if a character can insite anger and emotion in readers, then, you\'ve developed their personality well. Eddie\'s biggest drawback is that he\'s not setting his sights higher that \'rebound guy\'. Any romantic relationship that Lianna would have with him now would always be a rebound one. He\'s got to realize this soon, and move on. I really don\'t want him getting in the way of Lianna and Joseph\'s reconciliation.

All in all, I really look forward to your updates. Hope your personal life calms down.

Lee Anne

I know there\'s such thing as freeedom of the press, but that was taking it to frickin far. I seriously hate how the press twists things around to make everything go the way they want. They butt into peoples lifes to many times. I mean come on if she wanted to date someone else after she broke up with Joseph she can date that person. It doesn\'t mean she\'s dating that person to get over Joseph. Of course yet again this little ramble isn\'t against you. Just the press who keep doing the stupid stuff they do when going after celebrities and their ex\'s.

Neways, you did a great job on this chapter and i really enjoyed reading it. I just know Lianna\'s boss was the one who spilt most of that info in the newspaper. Who wouldn\'t know that. I\'m glad Lianna is going to go to the concert to see Joseph and that Tavian is going to be there also. I just hope she doesn\'t go and sleep with Joseph. Joseph did a good thing when he had the lawyer call the paper and tell them not to print stories with her. Ah well. Keep up the great work and update soon.

And so once again I review a story that I have been following since very close to the beginning... GREAT CHAPTER! Seriously man, write more. More. More. And when you do that, do it again. Youre writing imporves with each chapter I see. My only complaint right now is that this is the only story that seems to be getting attention (not that im saying the attention you are giving this one is bad ^-^). Keep it up.

awesome chapter additions.... keep it up, i\'m interested to see whether lianna will be alone, reconcile with joseph or develop something with eddie or someone else.