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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, they back together!
Happiness!
Great work, keep it up!
Happiness!
Great work, keep it up!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 chapters left?! U CANT BE SERIOUS! U HAVE TO MAKE MORE CHAPTERS LIKE 50 OR SOMETHING THIS STORY IS SO GOOD u mean jerk!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH....MY.....GOD!!!! I loved this chapter. I laughed and cried and the laughed again. I am so glad that Joseph and Lianna are back together. Most of all I\'m proud of Joseph for telling that bitch off. I will be smiling for the rest of the day. Tirch you are and awesom writer, and I can\'t wait to read the rest of your story. Great Job!
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Speechless. Totally speechless. I didn\'t review the last chapter because I was eagerly waitng the next and was too excited to say anything. I really liked this chapter. Lianna... is an unforgettable character... Acutally all your characters are unforgettable. Although I think they might of jumped in their relationship a bit too fast after being hurt like that, it\'s ok because I honestly think they can\'t just be friends. Speaking of friends Madison is being completly awesome in the best friend role. She really, really cares for Lianna and I\'m glad that someone is like that in Lianna\'s life. Tavian is once again... a great guy! Lol He even did the panty check on Lianna for Madison. Eddie= great guy friend... and I\'m glad he figured it out because I do like the guy. I told you Sandy would sell her out! I TOLD YOU!!! Lol I was right... yes... I love it when that happens. Lol
Joseph... awwww. He really does get how horrible he screwed it up. He told Frankie what she needed to hear. And in fact... he made me realize that she did prostitute herself, which is even worse. She better goddamn know not to fuck with Joseph and Lianna now. Joseph after all, just showed how much he was devoted to Lianna. His words were just right. I really can\'t balme Lianna for forgiving him so quickley. Honeslty, if I was in her position I would probably throw myself on the guy instead of controling myself with a a small kiss. Lol
I guess I am just in a happy mood tonight, thats why I was laughing so much. Darn only two more chapters left. I sincerely hope there is going to be a sqeuel?
Kali
Joseph... awwww. He really does get how horrible he screwed it up. He told Frankie what she needed to hear. And in fact... he made me realize that she did prostitute herself, which is even worse. She better goddamn know not to fuck with Joseph and Lianna now. Joseph after all, just showed how much he was devoted to Lianna. His words were just right. I really can\'t balme Lianna for forgiving him so quickley. Honeslty, if I was in her position I would probably throw myself on the guy instead of controling myself with a a small kiss. Lol
I guess I am just in a happy mood tonight, thats why I was laughing so much. Darn only two more chapters left. I sincerely hope there is going to be a sqeuel?
Kali
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! THANK FUCKING GOD!!!!!! *does a happy dance*... phew ok now that i got that out. I am so completly happy with the way you had L. forgive J. it was perfect YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS (sorry.. couldnt hold that one in) anyways keep writing amazing stuff chicka.. oh oh and mabye you could write a story on sin and zip.. it would be tres perfecto(hehe french and spanish) anyways... keep up the good work.. im so happy WHEEEEEEEEEE ~Southern
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. Very funny and you got them back together (didn\'t you?)
Liana really needed to hear Joseph dealing with Frankie. But I\'m also afraid of what she could come up with now as a revenge.
Actually I aslo can\'t wait for Maddy to meet Sin. Put those two together in the same room and all hell breaks loose
Liana really needed to hear Joseph dealing with Frankie. But I\'m also afraid of what she could come up with now as a revenge.
Actually I aslo can\'t wait for Maddy to meet Sin. Put those two together in the same room and all hell breaks loose
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCK, that was the best chapter yet!, well done well done, i cant wait to c what happens nexT! U BETTER UPDATE SOON OR SUFER MY WRATH!
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, the lasting sense of correctness:) There wasnt a story without Joseph, so I guess I called that one! Great chapter, been looking for one that lifted the mood a little bit and that one sure did the trick. Now, all you have to do is make Joseph fire Frankie, and we can all die happy.
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know i hated joey for a while there, but now? Now i think he\'s fucking awesome--you turned the whole story around AND introduced a new character (who\'s my new fav character btw). oh it\'s so EXCITING!!!!!
Please update soon,
-G
Please update soon,
-G
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July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was practically bouncing in my chair by the end of this chapter, tears running down my cheeks, saying \"YAY! They got back together!\" My roomie officially thinks I\'m crazy now ^_^
I LOVE Sin! It is an amazing writer that can make their reader fall in love with a character so quickly. I\'m glad you introduced her to us, even if we may not see her that much. The underwear thing was great too. I loved how you started and ended the chapter with it -nice flow ^_^
I hope they do make it together. I was afraid that Joseph was going to do something else to mess up. It made me so happy that he told off Frankie. She\'s such a -well, you know ^_~
I\'ll be patiently awaiting the final chapters to this great story!
I LOVE Sin! It is an amazing writer that can make their reader fall in love with a character so quickly. I\'m glad you introduced her to us, even if we may not see her that much. The underwear thing was great too. I loved how you started and ended the chapter with it -nice flow ^_^
I hope they do make it together. I was afraid that Joseph was going to do something else to mess up. It made me so happy that he told off Frankie. She\'s such a -well, you know ^_~
I\'ll be patiently awaiting the final chapters to this great story!