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awesome job!! I like the way you wrap things up, leaving a few loose ends for another story...? (hint hint). Maybe Sinn and Eddie or something. I like the Sinn idea anyway, she seems awesome, and she has soooo much potential as a character. Anyway, can\'t wait for the last chappie....
love always,
G

YES! Do a story about Sin. Maybe about her adventures in Australia? I would say do one about her and Zip, but I\'m not too interested in him...I think just because he wasn\'t really built as a character in this story...although, I LOVE the way they play off each other in this chapter. The only thing I can see that could potentially go wrong with a romance about Sin is that she could end up getting too...soft?...in the end. She doesn\'t seem all hearts and mushy stuff to me ^_^ But, I think that you have proven yourself quite able when it comes to retaining your characters\' personalities through a variety of situations. Do it! ^_^

Anyways, great chapter! I\'m really happy that Lianna and Joseph got back together and are working through their problems. Although, something inside of me is still squeezing my eyes shut in dread that something is going to go wrong (it\'s because you keep putting that \'we\'ll see what their future holds\' at the end and it makes me so anxious! ^_^). I think the thing I liked the most about this chapter was that I was laughing through most of it. I love Sin and Madison.

Oh, and another thing I wanted to say, I absolutely love the titles you give to some of your chapters. When I read the title to this one, I immediately went \'I\'m not sure I want to know...\' which was caused, partially, by the absolutely fantastic and slightly crazy supporting characters you have created in this story. Great work, and of course, the necessary \'Can\'t WAIT for the next chapter! Update soon! PLEEASE!\' ^_~

DAMN U I SAID NOT JUST 2 CHAPTERS U CANT STOP NOW DAMIT DAMIT!

Thank you! Thank you for writing a story I love. I am so happy they are back together. It is really \'Like a Dream Come True\'. I can\'t wait for the last chapter, although I\'m not sure if I\'ll ever be completely full.

I really hate yo do this but....... If you don\'t post soon I will die of starvation. There I said my peace. UPDATE PLEASE!

I hope Joseph and Lianna make it together. They\'re perfect for each other. I\'m glad Lianna forgave Joseph and that Joseph pratically bit off Frankie\'s head. That was one of the best parts of the chapter. The underwear check was wicked funny and I can only imagine Joseph\'s face when Tavian said that. That would have been a picture perfect moment. Sin is the best. She\'s like me, we both want to kill Frankie and we both like photography, only the photos I take are for my Japanese scrapbook.

I did catch on tiny mistake near the beginning of the chapter. \"“Sometimes I’m not the best at explaining myself. It drives Tavian nuts,” he told Lianna.\" Madison said that so shouldn\'t it be, she told Lianna?

You did a great job and just keep up the great work.

AIEE!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!! I WANT MORE NOW!!!!!!!!! WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz update soon!

I have so many good things to say about your story, but then i\'d be here for days...

so i will just say this PLEASE UPDATE!

This time I didn\'t cry...no no....I cheered, I whooped, I hollered, and made such a happy noise the cops were called. lol Kidding, the cops weren\'t called, my landlord was.
Can you tell I\'m happy that Lianna and Joseph made up?

Go Joey, tellin Frankie-mutt off like that! That\'s what I\'ve been itching to hear, though I still think that she ought to have an opportunity to meet Madison. Yes, definitely. That would be such a happy ending right there.

Only two left, man I don\'t know if I want it to end. You\'re doing such a great job! I wonder if you take requests....

Waiting eagerly for the next installment! ^_^