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for Like a Dream Come True

by Tirch

person cukid9
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"As everyone had expected, Sin and Madison were a riot together.\" I cracked up when I read this line...cuz all I could think to myself was, \'does she mean everyone in the story? or everyone reading this?\' Also, as soon as Frankie walked into the bathroom with Madison and Sin I immediately went \'UH OH!\' This was a great final chapter! I just KNEW Madison and Tavian would be making babies ^_^ I\'m not sure what else there is to say about this story that I haven\'t already said. I\'m so happy that you are going to continue writing. Watching your progress since your first story has been amazing. Not that your first wasn\'t good, but this one was EXCELLANT. I really look forward to reading your future stories.

And hurray about doing a story about Sin! I know I said in my last review that I wasn\'t too interested in reading about her and Zip. But, for some reason, this chapter changed my mind, and I was torn between wanting to read about her and Zip and her and Eddie. I think, though, that her and Eddie would make for a better story. Their personalities are so different that there are bound to be all kinds of crazy things that could happen! Oh, and I hope you, at sometime in the near future, continue \'Why Bother?\' I hate putting things like that in reviews, but *sigh* I really like the story and just wanted to let you know. I\'m not trying to pressure! I know what it\'s like to be writing a story and then suddenly it seems like you just run out of things to write.

So, great work, keep it up, blah blah -you know the rest ^_~ I will definitely keep an eye out for a new story from you!
person Angel
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks!! I\'m only on chapter 6 and Im hooked! Joey is such a sweet guy Lianna is really sweet too. They are so deserving of each other. Gotta feel bad for Lianna in a way though. Those situations must feel so foreign. Love the writing!!
person Angel
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! And I forgot to mention your jokes are SOOO funny! Some of the characters (especially maddy!) are hilarious! Keep up the smart ass remarks! LOVE EM!
person Sadism In a Box
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! Wonderful, wonderful wonderful! I loved that Tavian and Madison got engaged, I was practically jumping up and down in my seat. My sister now thinks I\'m crazy. When Frankie got busted I was so relieved, I was hoping something bad would happen to that bitch. I\'m also pleased that you chose Eddie and Sin to be the next couple, because that was who I was rooting for (and Sin is my favorite character). It ought to make for an interesting story. To adress Joseph and Liana\'s situation..I hope an engagement is in the future, because I do believe Joseph has redemed himself. I loved this story immensly, it always kept me guessing or yearning for more..and I actually got involved while reading it. This had to be one of your best of all you stories yet. Again, loved it! Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u fucking better make a sequel or ill hunt ur ass down!
person Kali
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am happy to say that I was reading the 19th chapter over to realize that i am the 5000 reader of this fic! Thats amazing go you!!! It shows how much everyone is connected to this story.

Joseph and Lianna are back and I can see the change that Joseph has had. He acts like he did before when they met. It\'s not only Joseph that has changed his ways though. Lianna has started to voice her opinions and he is accepting them for what they are. I think they are in line for some true love right now. Sandy is pissing me off. She sold not only her employee but friend out to the papers and apoligised like it was something she really didn\'t mean to do. I think that she was selfishand Lianna made the right descision to stay on a professional status with her at the moment. Maddie is wonderful. I liked it that she made Joseph squirm... He better not (excuse me) fuck up again or else I\'ll find him and kick his ass. Right now though, I\'m rooting for a happy ending that they both deserve.

Only one chapter left eh? I can\'t wait to read it... and also I\'m hopeing maybe there will be a sequel? That would make my day but if you feel you have done enough and explained enough with this couple I respect that too.

I can\'t wait to see how this ends and whats in store for your writing next.

Kali
person Cariad
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter and hot.

Sin\'s truly something. I wonder if she\'s not tring to protect herself by acting like that, but from what? Maybe she needs to settle down a bit. And Eddie is still available *hint hint*

I don\'t feel sorry for Lianna\'s boss, she should have thinkbefore gossipping about her firend first, even if in the end the reporter enchanced what she said. Lianna handled the situation right.

I have still some questions on their future. I know J is doing everything he can to keep her for good this time, but when he\'s going to be on tour will she still be able to trust him completely? It makes me think about a good friend of mine who met a famous rock singer last week (no I won\'t tell you who), and they got caried away even if he said he had a girlfriend back home.

I\'m waiting impatiently for the last chapter.
person Lady Rain
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really! I inspired idea?! I\'m....gonna act cool but really I\'mliketotallystokedaboutit!

This was such a sweet chap! And man, what a way to spend an afternoon....*sigh* I remember them days...

I\'m glad her boss is really sorry, and, though she\'s to blame, didn\'t say those things as the mag had printed them to be. But what a loss at the cost of a few errant words.

Now I\'m am seriously wondering what Maddy said to Joseph to make his white-out like that. She must have threatened all his body parts and the parts of all his furture lives or something.

Okay I\'m gonna sit here and wait patiently for the next udate....just sitting here, checking the page every day......even on lunch breaks....
person CD
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo....Zip ... and Sin... eheheheeee I could so see a spin off story on that one. *sigh* I think I may be addicted to your writing. Lol. Keep it up.
person Nikku
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope Zip fires Frankie and they find a new manager. Lol, but of course Eddie is the most important part right now. He does need to know what is going on, I just don\'t really want to read his reaction. But I will. I\'m glad Madison \'talked\' to Joseph even if it was more like she \'threatened\' Joseph. Lol. You\'re doing a great job and I\'m glad that Lianna and Jospeh are back together. So update soon, and i\'m sad about the next chapter being the last. Keep up the great work.

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