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*SNIFF SNIFF* WAHHH!!! THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY POSSITIVELY!!!... I CANT EVEN EXPLAIN HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW TO HAVE READ AND FINISHED THIS STORY!!! *SNIFF SNIFF!!!...* (SOMEONE PASSES THE TISSUES...) OH... THANK YOU... (I ACCEPT THEM AND LOOK UP...) O_O AHHHH!!! (T-THERES SIN... AND SHES ABOUT READY TO KILL ME FOR NOT READING THE NEXT STORY) AND BTW I FEEL REALLY BAD FOR EDDIE!!!... T^T WAHHH!!!... ANYWAY... I GOTTA GO NOW AND READ THE OTHER STORY CAUSE SIN IS SITTING RIGHT HERE NEXT TO ME AND SHES STARING AT ME... KIND OF FREAKY REALLY!!!... O_O

LOVED IT!!!! Great story. Im glad Lianna and Joseph ended up together =) And that witch Frankie is out of the picture!

I just want you to know that this story has touched me in a way I can\'t describe. I think you are a VERY talented writer. Your an artist. I\'m fairly new to this site, and I have read every one of your stories, this one is the best so far. I could go on and on for days, but i won\'t. Instead I will just say i can\'t wait for a sequel***.


Heather

Sorry I have not been reviewing after each update because my laptop battery died. Now that my computer is working again I’m going to review chapters 17, 18, 19 and 20 all at once. This is one of your best work I must say. Madison and Tavian is a riot. They made me laugh so much in the last four chapters. Tavian was so cute when he proposed to Madison and it was definitely original. I really adore Lianna and Joseph together thank you so much for getting them back together. You definitely deflated Joseph’s ego and you made him really sincere in his love for Lianna. And I wanted to point out that at least Joseph didn’t use the drunk excuse. Definitely digging the changes in Lianna and Joseph. This story seemed really planned and you didn’t skip a beat with the characters or the story line. I am glad that you will make references to Joseph and Lianna in Sin and Eddie’s story. I really like your new character named Sin and she is such a badass. I like her attitude and I would very much like to read how she can win Eddie’s heart and how he can win hers. I feel bad for Eddie because he is such a good guy. I think he needs someone like Sin. I don’t know how to thank you enough for writing, updating often and for sharing your creativity. You’re awesome and after this review I am gonna read Original Sin. Thanks again.

I have quite a short review this time. All I can say is Bravo.

Eddie and Sin would make a perfect couple. Glad your thinking about writing that. I\'ll read it though I probably won\'t be able to review every chapter. But i\'m going to miss updates on this story. Keep up the great work and I can\'t wait for more from you, no matter what type of story it is.

YES!!! Yes, for Frankie. Yes, for Joseph and Lianna (I saw you didn\'t call him Joey again, was that on purpose?). And of course Yes for Maddy andTavian.

Your next story sounds really interresting. I wonder how you will manage to have those 2 together. Will you tame Sin? Or have Eddie acting on his wild side?

It\'s...it\'s really over....I can\'t believe it.
But man what a way to go! I totally loved this chap!! AND BIG YAY FOR FRANKIE_MUTT GETTING NAILED LIKE THAT!!! Man talk about feeling a huge wave of relief and utter joy at that scene. Granted it wasn\'t quite how I had imagine it, but you what, I like this version far better. Much more class than a brawling chick-fight.

And what a happy ending, man that was one helluva way to propose. My man did it on the smoke-deck, way romantic.... I like Maddy\'s far better.
And I just want you to know, that I shall be checking back again and again for the new Sin and Eddie story. You could call it Pretty as Sin. ^_^

Can\'t wait! Applause from all for a job well done!!

Loved the story. You writing keeps getting better with each story. Keep up and can\'t wait to read about Eddie and Sin -- Water and Oil. Great!!!!!

Awesome story ending. As far as Eddie and Sin...???... well, I guess I can see her more with Zip. They are both crass, loud, foul-mouthed, give it as good as you get it kind of ppl. At the same time, maybe thats why they didn\'t work out. But damn, Eddie need to grow a spine of titanium to handle the firecracker that is Sin. We\'ll see what happens and I will leave the world of your characters in your hands to do with as you will. Zip is kind of a man whore but if he is to be the odd man out in this story, I do hope to see a story for him eventually. It would be a nice closing to this little story set. So off we send you...write away...torture us as you will.