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for Like a Dream Come True

by Tirch

person Debbie
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey keep up the good work cuz the story so far is going great...Plz update soon.thanxs
person Anon
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 5 and 6 are really good. I have to compliment you on getting the essence of a musician’s lifestyle. I know it is fictional but some parts are actually nonfiction. You did a very good job on chapter 6. Why is Joseph still keeping pictures of himself being with other girls around? It’s good that you have Lianna questions things about her relationship with Joseph. I was afraid Lianna might be blind because she loves him so much. Now, I think she is getting a little paranoid. But who can blame her. So far you’re doing a good job with this story in my opinion. Thanks for updating.
person Debbie
schedule May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovin the story so far want to know wat happens next after chapter 4, plz update soon. thanxs
person Anon
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 3 and 4 are really hot but also funny. Joseph is cheeky and Lianna is cute because of the personality you gave her. I like the part when Frankie offered Lianna drugs and Lianna replied, “I had a Red Bull earlier.” For some reason I found that line funny. Love how this story has the drug, sex and rock’n roll element to it. Thanks for updating.
person Michelle
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was Hot! this will be an interesting relationship, huh? and in chapter 4, Denise becomes Debbie halfway through.
person Bubbleh
schedule May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Josette
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. I can\'t wait till ch 4. Ohhh that Frankie looks like trouble. Keep up the good work.
person Debbie
schedule May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey ive read your fic so far n Im lovin it, I hope u upd8 soon cuz i wanna know wat happens next. Plz upd8 soon!!!
person Josette
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start on new story. I think most ladies can relate to this story line. Who wouldn\'t like to be asked out by some gorgeous hunk who turned out to be nice and rich. It would be Like a Dream Come True. Thanks for the story and please continue.
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start, I am already charmed by both main characters. I\'m really looking forward to reading another one of your rocker meets ordinary girl love story. Gotta like guys with tattoos and eyeliners. I like that this story has both characters in their early twenties so the relationship will probably be more complex with a lot of drama and I get a feeling Lianne might face a lot of difficulties dating a musician. Your busy but your taking the time to write so I wanted to say thanks.