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Good chapter and I’m surprise at what just happened at the end of this chapter. This might sound weird but I like that this story doesn’t have Lianna and Joseph confessing that they love one another right away. This is a rhetorical question but does Joseph think that his relationship with Lianna is strong enough to bring in a third party into the relationship. Sorry I tend to analyze things way too much sometimes and my only excuse is that I’m minoring in psychology. I am sorry to hear that you’re having some personal problems. If you need to get away and not write for a while I’ll understand. I’m just one anonymous reviewer but you have no idea how I truly appreciate your writing and the time you take to update once every week. For example, even when I went up to New York for a week I had to use my best friend’s computer to check and review your stories. I’m not obsessive really I’m not:) I have read all of your stories that you have posted here and they are not confusing or boring at all. Your stories have mature subjects and matters that I feel some readers might not be able to grasp at a certain age and your story telling is unique. That\'s not a bad thing either. Just please give yourself some credit. Goodness this is a long review but I tend to go on a rampant sometimes, sorry. Thanks for updating and please take care of yourself.

It\'s interesting and you know what, it could be much worse... As for your writers block I say you go sister. Hell my block has lasted for two years and won\'t go away! Kudos to you girl for getting a story out that\'s good and captures the attention of the reader.

Hey please update soon would like 2 know wat happens next, it\'s getting realli interesting, please update soon. thanxs

This was not boring by any means! Anyone who says that has probably never read your writing, and doesn\'t know that there usually are a few \'fun\' chapters before you get into the drama, right? Good chapter! I worry for Lianna and Joseph, because again, judging from your previous works, it\'s only a matter of time before the shit hits the fan, am i right? (Note: that is a GOOD thing. . I like drama ^_^)

Anyway, great job. . don\'t worry about people, hun. You\'ve got talent, and don\'t let the idiots get you down.

this has totaly become my fav story by you...keep up the good work...

juat to let you know, you forgot to change Joanna to Lianna a couple of times in this chapter. other than thet this is amazing!

Loved your last chapter it was really good n wasn\'t even boring, would like to know what happens next. plz update soon.

Great chapter! Nice to know Joseph isn\'t using Lianna . . . it\'s gonna be a rocky road ahead, though, judging by your past works. No problems here though. ~_^. Also, just wanted to point out one little typo; During one of the scenes, you used the name \"Joanna\" instead of Lianna. No bigging, just wanted to let you know. Take care!

Chapter 7 is not boring it actually answered some questions I had about Joseph. Poor Lianna, what women do to please their men. Thanks for updating.

wow, this is an amazing story, you are a really good author, please continue updating!