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keeep it coming chica....i like the way this is going. Not predictable but not too wild either.

In this chapter Joseph was a total ass but I’m glad to see Lianna a little assertive. It was still a great chapter. Thanks for updating.

niiice twist! can\'t wait to see how it turns out...I hope she stays strong and doesn\'t let him bully her

Heey, thanxs for updating the last chapter was really tense and was really goo. Keep up the good work and dont let nebody get ya down becuz of wat nasty comments they ave sed of this fic cuz i think its good. wud realli like to know wat happens next soo plz update soon..im dyin to know wat happens next. So plz update soon, thanxs!

Oh, I think that Lianna should totally leave Joseph and go for Eddie ^_^ At the beginning of this story I really liked Joseph...but now his attitude really reminds me of an ex of mine. I found myself feeling angry for Lianna...poor girl! Maybe he will redeem himself. But I would be hard pressed to forgive him.

So, another great chapter! I\'ve been reading, but not reviewing as much as I should, I\'m sure ^_^ You have a great talent for making the reader feel very sympathetic for your characters, which is wonderful because it keeps us coming back for more!

Keep it up!

Well, I really enjoyed what you have written so far. It sorta is like a dream come true, dating a musician. I only have my police officer husband. But this story is great, i\'m glad I found it. Keep up the great work and update whenever you can.

Chapter 9 was good especially with the dialogue between Lianna and Angel. I was a little apprehensive in reading this chapter because I can be a prude sometimes. But you proved me wrong because you did a brilliant job by always focusing on the relationship and what this means to their relationship instead of making it just about sex. I almost forgot to mention this but in chapter 8 you accidentally put Leah instead of Lianna in this sentence “Yeah,” Leah took a big swig of her champagne…” Thanks for updating.

Either you really really wanted to write the sex sceen at the start of this chapter or you were absolutely DREADING it... I\'m going with the latter. The reason I say this is because in more than one case you repeated yourself or just made dumb mistakes... stuff that normally doesn\'t accompany your writing. However... after that little fiasco was exactly what needed to be done and said. The whole thing with the reporter had to have come eventually, and putting it when Lianna had just woken up and was completely not expecting it was the right move. As always, keep it up.

Thanxs 4 updatin, the last chapter was very good n quite exciting, wud realli like 2 know wot happens next, so plz upd8 soon n keep up da good job, thanxs

I am enjoying this story immensely. I can honestly say that you\'re one of my 3 fave authors on this website, and everytime you start a new story, I am interested to see where you will take your characters and keep us all interested. Your stories are all amazing, and you should be incredibly proud of yourself for managing to write such an ace chapter with writers block! I think this story is going in a good direction, and I hope you continue. Just take your time, and don\'t feel pressurised to do it as quick as you can.

Good luck!