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ugh what a fucktard... i hope frankie gets maimed/hurt deeply in any and all ways possible and i really hope she doesnt forgive him and go back to him

first, i really have to say \'EW\'. now that that is done with, i\'m almost crying after reading that! granted, that\'s paired with my reading a sappy romance novel earlier tonight, but still. i just want to go and slap that boy until some sense is knocked into him. that, too, might have to do with a past experience with a baseball player, but still.
i realize that the whole Frankie bit has been foreshadowed since the character was first intruduced, so i understand why it had to be done. snaps on making her out to be the true bitch that she is.
i cannot wait for the next installment.
but if you make them get back together, especially after his sleeping with the stick, i swear to you that i will scream. a nice tear-jerker of a romance would be great to read, and more realistic.
granted, i might just be harboring pent-up relationship frustration.
yours truly,
cope

How asinine can Joseph get. Make Joseph work really hard to get Lianna back if she’ll take him back. Joseph sure knows how to pick the most perfect time to admit his love for Lianna. Chapter 12 showed a pivotal point in the story so the length of the story doesn\'t really matter. Thanks for updating.

I just spent the last four hours reading every chapeter of your story, litterally the last four hours. I couldn\'t stop. I am offically addicted, to the characters, to the story line, and well the whole damn thing. I say execellent work. Please contiue cause I may just die of withdrawals. May I also mention, this is the very first story I have read on this site. It really made for an interesting day. I could go on and on, but I will save you some time, you\'ll need it to write more. One last thing, GREAT JOB!!

Memory Chase

OMG!!!! I\'m actually crying! With everything that is going on in my life right now (see wolfe fam home - random), I could feel her pain. I have really enjoyed reading your stories and I hope that you continue to write. Thanks for sharing your talent.

I\'ve been following your story since you started writing it. Sorry that I haven\'t reviewed until now. This was a particularly good chapter. My heart actually hurts for poor Lianna. I always thought that somewhere deep inside, Joey was really a jackass. I hope she really teaches him a lesson. Keep up the great writing.

wow...i can\'t believe it\'s come to the point where joey\'s no better than frankie. all i hold for him now is disgust. to believe i actually once respected him...now? he doesn\'t even deserve pity. he couldn\'t have been that drunk to have not known what he was doing when he was sleeping with frankie. and the fact that he said he would never have slept with frankie if he knew that lianna would consider talking to him proves my theory that he did know what he was doing when he slept with frankie. i hope he gets his comeuppance...and i hope he gets it twice as bad as what lianna went through.

wow...i can\'t believe it\'s come to the point where joey\'s no better than frankie. all i hold for him now is disgust. to believe i actually once respected him...now? he doesn\'t even deserve pity. he couldn\'t have been that drunk to have not known what he was doing when he was sleeping with frankie. and the fact that he said he would never have slept with frankie if he knew that lianna would consider talking to him proves my theory that he did know what he was doing when he slept with frankie. i hope he gets his comeuppance...and i hope he gets it twice as bad as what lianna went through. ugh! what a jerk.

The title of this story matchs the content perfectly.

Joseph seemd kind of nice, and he was nearly the perfect boyfriend at first, but then Joey took the advantage and began thinking of himself only. Or at least acting so. I liked what Tavian tolf him on the evening before. He\'s not the same, he changed.

He has to understand she fell for who he is not what he is, and this change is not welcome at all. Maybe Eddie can help here.

I thought Lianna weak to bar so much from him. Of course she\'s in love, but he has been treating her like shit lately and she hadn\'t react.

Hopefully loosing her will show him how much she means to him, and not to take her for granted

I love this story but don\'t leave us hanging like that.