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NO!!!!! There i was thinking she finally found her strength, God i feel sooooo bad for Lianna but i HOPE she does not get back with him!!!

Son of a - !
Could you maybe personally introduce me to Frankie so that I can beat her face in (killing her), bring her back to life, rip certain body parts off of her (killing her from blood loss), bring her back to life again, and turn her over to the Lianna fans..like all of them, including me (so I can bring her back to life each time she\'s killied so that she can be killed again)?
...so much for control...
That evil bitch is only out for herself.. I almost believed her in the last chapter with that \"friend\" crap. That bitch. Oooo, she makes me cringe and then the bloodthirst kicks in. I\'m almost mad at Joey, really only because he was gullible enough to \"talk\" to her as a \"friend\" and then to tell Lianna at that time that he loves her. Like that, it just sounds desperate and completely faux. Oooo, he had better haul his ass all over the place to get back together with Lianna.. if she\'ll have it.

Hey, can we have Frankie drawn and quartered? Please?!?!

Keep up the awesome work!!

oh la laaaaa what\'s she gonna do now!! can\'t wait for your update!!
-G

Like the last couple of chapters - good work. OK it\'s painful, but she needs to find her centre again before diving back in. Eddie might be theraputic... Keep it up

Another great chapter. No criticsm here, sorry.

How sad!!! Poor Liana. Thanks for the update. Keep writing please.

Again, near tears!! Oh man, how I have heard those lines before. Lianna is a stronger woman than I and I applaude her for sticking to her guns like that, well....a slip up at the end was nearly inevitable, but can\'t blame her really.

Still if he\'s really sorry than he\'ll prove it without her immediately giving him a second chance, cause he knows that she\'s not won over so easily. Make him work for her. In the end if nothing else it\'ll make him a better person.
And as for Frankie, I\'d say the best way to prove it would be to fire the tramp.

Now, I can tell that Eddie would be such a better match for Lianna and so I hope we see much more of that coming along.
I\'m looking forward to the next update!

Oh, that didn\'t just happen!!! Ok, after this chapter I was caught between cheering for Eddie for being such a nice guy, calling Joseph a jerk, or screaming at Lianna for SLEEPING with him!! OMG she SLEPT with him?! What is she THINKING?!

ARGH! You have done such a great job of creating a huge range of emotions in this chapter. One part of me still likes Joseph, a VERY small part (I know, I\'ve said this before and I still don\'t know WHY I continue to hold out for him). But Eddie...omg, how sweet is he? I like Eddie ^_^

So, really I don\'t know what I want to happen. I guess I\'ll just leave it in your hands to tell me (like I have any choice in the matter ^_^).

only thing i didn\'t like was that lianna gave in too easily at the end...i think joseph needs lianna away from him for awhile...to know what it feels like not to have everything at his beck and call, at his fingertips. but i also hope for a happy ending...i hope this story doesn\'t end like \'you don\'t know me.\'

wow...i think this is the best story you have written so far. i really, really enjoyed this story. you have a great way of bringing out emotions from your readers. keep up the great work & update soon!!