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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ugh lianna\'s pissing me off!! i think she should be alone
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July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOO....i see a twist coming. I am rooting to J/L and the ultimate downfall of the super bitch, but alas i must wait and see. I am expecting that there will be a thread that pulls them back together...(...forgive me but as much as I like Eddie, I just can\'t bring myself to support him and Lianna) Frankie would get her way if Lianna goes away. Looking forward to seeing how much more you can stress me out with the story\'s twists.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. But i still hope that she kicks his ass to the curb once and for all...and that Frankie gets pushed off the apartment balcony...
your\'s truly,
cope
your\'s truly,
cope
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can understand her mistake in sleeping with Joseph. As a woman myself I can relate to her situation, but I hope she doesn’t do it again until Joseph can prove to be trustworthy and respect her as a career woman. In my opinion Eddie should just stay as a friend even though he is the sweetest guy. Thanks for updating.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry that I haven\'t posted reviews for the other chapters, I just started to read it yesterday and was completly consumed by it. But now when I am forced to wait for another chapter I\'ll take my time to write to you.
Lianna and Joseph started as a fun couple, he respected her and she respected him. When they moved in things started going down hill from there. Sure it went great for a few weeks but then Joseph started to get more cocky around her and started to disrespect her as as a person. Not only did he insult Lianna, but me as well, because he couldn\'t see that other people have to make their own lives too. When Lianna started to stand up for himself he started to get more defensive on his life and insult Lianna\'s lifestyle even more... Hey Joseph NOT all of us can be rockstars! Tavian, oh Tavian. YOU put Joseph in his place, Tavaian knew Joseph before he was famous and hearing something like that from Tavian must of done something to Josephs ego. Tavian loves Maddy and is a great friend to Lianna. I just hope he gets a chance to kick Joseph\'s ass. lol. Maddy, is a hell of a friend. I love her attitude about everything, she is always confident for the future and pushed Lianna the extra step she needed to go to get over Joseph a little more...Eddie, for some reason right now, seems like he is goigng to do more damage to me than good. Of course he is a great guy and is very thoughtful, but it seems he is starting to think of Lianna as more than just a friend... THAT SLUT!!! I can\'t believe that Joey slept with Frankie, that is so disrespectful to Lianna, if he loved her so much, he wouldn\'t of been clouded by the alcohol like that and never slept with Frankie in the first place. Although his attempts to get back together with Lianna are making my own eyes fill with tears, Lianna has to be strong. But not just for herself, but for all of us girls out here reading this story!
Keep up with the good work because I am so attached to this story now! I think you are a truely gifted author!
Kali
Lianna and Joseph started as a fun couple, he respected her and she respected him. When they moved in things started going down hill from there. Sure it went great for a few weeks but then Joseph started to get more cocky around her and started to disrespect her as as a person. Not only did he insult Lianna, but me as well, because he couldn\'t see that other people have to make their own lives too. When Lianna started to stand up for himself he started to get more defensive on his life and insult Lianna\'s lifestyle even more... Hey Joseph NOT all of us can be rockstars! Tavian, oh Tavian. YOU put Joseph in his place, Tavaian knew Joseph before he was famous and hearing something like that from Tavian must of done something to Josephs ego. Tavian loves Maddy and is a great friend to Lianna. I just hope he gets a chance to kick Joseph\'s ass. lol. Maddy, is a hell of a friend. I love her attitude about everything, she is always confident for the future and pushed Lianna the extra step she needed to go to get over Joseph a little more...Eddie, for some reason right now, seems like he is goigng to do more damage to me than good. Of course he is a great guy and is very thoughtful, but it seems he is starting to think of Lianna as more than just a friend... THAT SLUT!!! I can\'t believe that Joey slept with Frankie, that is so disrespectful to Lianna, if he loved her so much, he wouldn\'t of been clouded by the alcohol like that and never slept with Frankie in the first place. Although his attempts to get back together with Lianna are making my own eyes fill with tears, Lianna has to be strong. But not just for herself, but for all of us girls out here reading this story!
Keep up with the good work because I am so attached to this story now! I think you are a truely gifted author!
Kali
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, eddy has a crush on Lianna doesn\'t he? Why else would he have a strange look in his eyes when Lianna said the word friends. Lianna shouldn\'t have slept with Joey. It was a bad idea. He\'s going away in two weeks and she slept with him. Oh well, things like that happen. You did a great job on this chapter. Update soon.
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Make it an unhappy ending for Joseph but somehow get Lianna to have a happy ending. Thats how I would go with it. But great work so far..
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was such a good chapter it made me cry..aww really want to know what happens to Lianna and Joseph..soo plz plz update soon, thanxs...by the way its going great
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, no no and no!!! She succeed to stand up against him, and then...no
Couldn\'t it have been Eddie. Joseph has to understand he can\'t make everything good again with sex. He\'s suffering good, he deserves it. Now let\'s hope he understood the lesson. Let him come back when he will be changed.
Couldn\'t it have been Eddie. Joseph has to understand he can\'t make everything good again with sex. He\'s suffering good, he deserves it. Now let\'s hope he understood the lesson. Let him come back when he will be changed.
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July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahh! You\'re mean. I\'m so torn right now, I want Lianna back with Joey (after he proves himself and that) but I also want her with Eddie (\'cause he\'s a freakin\' nice guy, like, beyond nice).
I know Lianna shouldn\'t have slept with him after that, back he REALLY shouldn\'t have come onto her in that hug by kissing her. If he was really thinking about all that he could lose if he lost her, he wouldn\'t have jumped like that at the possibility that they would get intimate.
Meh, so much complication, so much confusing emotion. Great, great, GREAT work.
Can we also draw and quarter the drawn and quartered pieces of Frankie?
I think she needs to be fired, and maybe a little jail, like, catch her for dishing coke.
I know Lianna shouldn\'t have slept with him after that, back he REALLY shouldn\'t have come onto her in that hug by kissing her. If he was really thinking about all that he could lose if he lost her, he wouldn\'t have jumped like that at the possibility that they would get intimate.
Meh, so much complication, so much confusing emotion. Great, great, GREAT work.
Can we also draw and quarter the drawn and quartered pieces of Frankie?
I think she needs to be fired, and maybe a little jail, like, catch her for dishing coke.