AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Like a Dream Come True

by Tirch

person Memory Chase
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way you are leaving the options open for Lianna. I personally would love to see Joseph and Lianna \"work things out\". But he should have to do something drastic to win her back. Maybe something including Frankie. Just my opinion. Anyway great job so far. I love the story.
person Adaee
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Laughs* There are certainly choices to be made, and that much is apparent. It didnt feel like you knew what or where you were going with the story in this chapter. Not that I can blame you, you\'ve got quiet a fan base on each of the three sides. Personally, I would like to see Lianna back with Joseph... but hey, its not my story;)
person Cariad
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just for the record I don\'t want Lianna ending up with Eddie, but with Joseph. He would be only a mean for J to see what he had lost.

Damn that reporter, I\'m very interrested in knowing how did J took the article. L is soo confused that talking in a few days on a nutral territory is a great idea, she needs to make some order in her ideas to be strong in front of J, but she also need to know where they\'re going from there since obviously she can\'t let him go that easily.
person Lady Rain
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you know, I can totally sympathize with Lianna. I\'ve been there, and it\'s totally hard, especially when the guy is that heart felt and sincere. Gosh, saying it\'s over is tough, keeping it that way is way tougher.
Kudos to her for again sticking to her gun!

But Eddie, I can just see that reporter guy catching a lunch meeting with her and Eddie and making up some wild rumor and having that put an even deeper wedge between her and Joseph. Way harsh if it does.

As for a good person to talk to, what about mom?

Okay enough from me, doing great!!! Waiting eagerly for the next update!!
person Ginger*
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow!! ur story\'s great, so addicting!! lol.. I hope she gets back together with Joey XD
person Kali
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter wasn\'t boring at all... I think that this a very tough time for Lianna, I also think that it\'s tearing her apart. While Eddie is a nice guy, I don\'t believe that is who she should be with. Eddie, I believe is meeting her because he wants something more with her. I don\'t think that it is a good idea to move in with Eddie, actually I think that is the worst thing she could do right now. I have a bad BAD feeling that Eddie is going to do something she, isn\'t going to appriciate. Joseph, sounds so despret, he really is willing to do anything to get her back. Lianna need to realize that she isnt being the only one torn up over this, she is breaking Joseph\'s heart too. Personally I would take the chance with Joseph if he really proved that he would do anything for me. I think she should take that chance too, love has its hardships and she needs to understand that. How will Joseph show that he is entrily devoted to Lianna with his heart and soul? I don\'t know and that is why I am waiting for your next chapters to see how it worls out.

Also With Eddie, reporters love creating gossip. Joseph is going on tour in a couple of weeks and she is moving in with Eddie? somehow that doesn\'t sit right with me, and it won\'t help wither, if the reporters are breathing down her back.

I can\'t wait to see how you get her out of this mess!

Kali
person Cata
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this since you first started on it, and might I say, I love it.
It\'s a great read so far, and I love where you are going with it.
But I don\'t want Lianna alone, because I don\'t see her as the single, I\'m not romantic, kinda gal.
I wouldn\'t want to see her with Eddie, because he\'s just.. he doesn\'t suit her. She doesn\'t feel right around him.
And he\'s TOTALLY jealous of Joseph.

As much as I hate to admit it, because an Ex of mine did the same thing as Joey here, I would rather see Lianna with Joseph.
He says he loves her. She KNOWS she loves him. Tavian and Maddison are in love. It would be crazy if Lianna did the 3rd Wheel deal forever!

_Catey_
person DisappearedCat
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Kind of cliched at certain points, some of it very predictable (the Frankie subplot) but for the most part really nicely thought out and executed. Can\'t wait to see what you do with it.

-DisappearedCat
person iotc247
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. However you are planning on doing it i hope that you at least make Joseph really try to earn her trust over a few chapters. Whether or not they get back together I would like to see him struggle, just makes the storing more interesting. Anyways good job so far and good luck with it.
person cukid9
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! You do this building of tension so well!

The suspense to see what happens is killing me! Don\'t make us wait too long! ^_^