schedule
June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I hope you write more:)
schedule
May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a well-written story, so far. I like the direction it is going and its not going too quickly.
I do believe you might be a bit disappointed, however, if you wanted a good bit of reviews. Not because something is wrong with your story, but because people on this site have a tendency to only review things filled with sex, obscenities, and burlesque humor.
But not to worry! There is a good site to put this on if you haven\'t already done so. It\'s called Fictionpress.com and I think this story might do fairly well on there. But it\'s just a suggestion. ^_^
I liked it anyway. Please update soon and if you please, e-mail me when you do? Thanks! See ya!
~CR
I do believe you might be a bit disappointed, however, if you wanted a good bit of reviews. Not because something is wrong with your story, but because people on this site have a tendency to only review things filled with sex, obscenities, and burlesque humor.
But not to worry! There is a good site to put this on if you haven\'t already done so. It\'s called Fictionpress.com and I think this story might do fairly well on there. But it\'s just a suggestion. ^_^
I liked it anyway. Please update soon and if you please, e-mail me when you do? Thanks! See ya!
~CR