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Hi, Camlia Waite,
I am adding this story to 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)', Rants/Journals section,
This is a wondeful story and it's completed! Good job
Thank you:)

Iffy beginning, FUCKIN' FANTASTIC ENDING (Muy, muy, muy, muy excelente y fantastico. La historia es bonita y comida!), iffy plot, iffy secondary characters, good flow, iffy backround plot,(very iffy, actually, porque la historia no tiene mucho... 'beef' to back it up), very heartwarming, I loved how Rush called his daughter by all those names, and I love the whole Pop-tart thing. Great story, love.

the story was really good
cute and fun
i like the perso's humour, it add to the story and it's the first thing that attracted me to that story
thanks for sharing such a cute story ^_^

HOLY SHIT!!!!! I loved that story seriously.....i read the first chapter when you first posted it then decided I didn\'t like it then I read your one-shots and the peach pie story (which i really really liked...go Fritzy yay!!) and didn\'t even realize it was the same author and when i did i went back to this story and read it all the way through and i must say this is my favorite story so far.....the story totally fuckin rocked and is going in my \"stories to keeep and read over and over\" file

damn girl u need a sequel!!

amazing work!!! loved it!!!

i really enjoyed this story. i liked rush\'s voice and vocabulary, he sounded like almost like a character from a 1940\'s movie in some places. them finally getting together was also VERY nice at the end, and i think their development was fairly believable. i always like stories where friends turn into more, and they both worked so well together. and the nicknames for the little girl were so cute :)

I love your style! That was so cute and happy it gave me the sniffles...