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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is sooo GOOD! I ahve a lot of wild fantasies... and so far... this one.. captured it really well. !!!! Please continue to write... I love torture...
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot, hot, hot! did i mention hot?
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good job. That\'s a very original storyline, kind of an AU, huh? I liked it, keep it up. Although, I don\'t much approve of her leaving the poor baby alone all the time, that thing needs some love and attention.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I liked that quite a bit! I especially love the beginning, how it starts off in the middle of one of her stories. Loved it even more when that guy practically came out of nowhere. I also like your use of descriptions and tone; it\'s not too much, keeping it at that imagined pace of rush with how he must finish before her husband comes home. I couldn\'t find any errors that stood out to me, however, so... Nice story! I enjoyed reading it.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting. i like it. first time i reveiwed for one of these. i think this will be a very succsessful story if you continue!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve added this fic to my list of \"Recommended Reading\". I love this story!
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, a story within a story. Very interesting. I definitely like this wild plot so far. I bet the 2nd chapter will be even better.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good start. I hope you continue this story. I\'ll keep an eye out for updates.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow im liking this, you write really well, keep up the good work!!