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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sure that\'s going to be quite the lesson she\'ll get! Hehe, I wonder, when she gets done with that story, if she\'ll try making a sequel for the sole purpose of bringing him back. Just an amusing little thought I just got. Anyhow, please do continue writing this story - I\'m especially looking forward to the next chapter.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good
i really love it
i guess it turned me on....
write more
i really love it
i guess it turned me on....
write more
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you are one lucky author. :) Kudos.......This is a fantastic story, It has become my all time favorite on this site! You painted him perfectly, Do you ever rent him out? ^^;; Sorry it just slipped out...........Fantastic work I only wish my best characters would come and ravish me.......but so far no luck. Keep up the Fantastic work and kiss the baby for me; I will wait patiently for more :)
~Moon-Daisuke
~Moon-Daisuke
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a great story.I can get so hard when I read a juicy part. Please continue. I love it
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic story, so lifelike and a real turn on.
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting so far:)
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, a story within a story, with hothothot scenes! *licks lips* so we get two stories in one, both with lemony goodness! *grins* i\'m loving it! can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inventive and sexy. Cool plot.
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May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Smut! The interchange between her \"reality\" with her story and the Marquis loose in her world is really quite interesting.
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my! I wonder what he\'ll do to Lauren this time! Nice details this time as well, although a bit more would be rather nice (but perhaps that\'s just me). Please keep on writing this story; I shall be waiting for the next chapter.