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I hope that god kills that monk. I don\'t like him! good story:)

I like this story... Its very interesting... I do hope you keep it up...

Another excellent chapter! Again, your descriptions really pull me into the world -- you\'re always so careful to make sure that your characters view everything in terms of metaphors that actually reflect their daily experience, rather than using images that would be unknown in their time and culture. A lot of writers wouldn\'t take so much care, but I really appreciate it. And I\'m really curious to find out what this new priest wants.

Love,
Falcon

Great story! You have a very beautiful and lyrical writing style, which is a pleasure to read. And your vivid descriptions really serve to root the story in a particular time and place. Despite the fact that I know very little about this culture, you make me see everything so clearly in my head.

Love,
Falcon

Lovely story you have so far! You sure have a talent with rhyming. :) Good luck writing this! I wonder how the wind kami will truly earn her heart.