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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You paint a beautiful picture. Your words are like that unknown blue at the edge of a cloud.
Now, my dear author, not to to sound to demanding but when are these two going to fuck? Maxwell intrigues me and Tory is being to test my patience.
Alas, I realize this is your delicious little fairly tale so I must wait for my happy ending.
Now, my dear author, not to to sound to demanding but when are these two going to fuck? Maxwell intrigues me and Tory is being to test my patience.
Alas, I realize this is your delicious little fairly tale so I must wait for my happy ending.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nicely put, and drawn. It is confusing but so intriguing! I feel sorry as much for Tory than for Maxwell... please are you going to end up our wait and theirs?.... ;-)
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, Its a good story, keep it up!
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this!
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Your writing style is very sensual. I like it. Tory seems to be quite angst-ridden. Sure would like a peek into that past. ^_^ I think if Maxwell doesn\'t use lube, I\'ll be very mad. ~laughs~ I\'m eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Please update soon!
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is beautiful. Unfortunately, I was unable to get throught the first chapter due to the complex language. For the normal populus, shakespearian language is not to be mixed with erotica. Wonderful attempt. I praise you for your skill.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am I a good authoress or is this guy fucked up?