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August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NEED A SEQUEL!!
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was actually really good and well-written.
only story I\'ve read with toddlerkon, too.
only story I\'ve read with toddlerkon, too.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, it was a well written story for sure except for one little part.
You portrayed the 12 year old daughter too immaturely. Now a days, 12 year olds say penis and dick not pee pee. I just felt that a 12 year old would know much more about sex then the way you had your character know.
You portrayed the 12 year old daughter too immaturely. Now a days, 12 year olds say penis and dick not pee pee. I just felt that a 12 year old would know much more about sex then the way you had your character know.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh that\'s hot
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good story, but I was disappointed with the ending. I expected the man and daughter to join the wife and grandfather so we can have a really happy ending. I would not have asked for a divorce. I would have the 4 of us to have sex on that bed.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not only that, I would have liked to see the man screw his new daughter when she\'s of age as well as the wife doing the same to her son.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
look, I, unlike some others, don\'t mind the whole writing about child porn and all that, not because it isn\'t sick, but because overall no one gets hurt, its all fantasy. But put a warning, somewhere in your summary or in the first paragraph for those of us who hate that kind of stuff. please.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That\'s all I can say, and I haven\'t yet decided whether it\'s a good OMG or a bad OMG. Either way, it was still well written. Good job.