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for Changing the guard

by PR903E

person Anon
schedule July 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
awesome story
person GlenGirl
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed the story, though I do think the daughter was a little too infantile in the beginning. Twelve-year-old girls don't refer to their cunts as "pee pee." Other than that, though, this was well done.
person Slinki
schedule April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, for one, twelve-year-olds don't call them pee-pees. And most of them really aren't that naive, nor are many of them virgins. So you might want to change that age a bit.
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmm rather intriguing
person lala
schedule January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
tha story was alright until the baby part. Sorry, insest is something that needs to get used to, and than you take the baby...not my thin, but well writen anyway.
person Nothingness
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just one got 1 word for u WOW ! ! ! ! !
person weirdo
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
strange strange man
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
...
person Pingu
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
any chances for a sequel? :)
person kassy
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice