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for My Desirable Prison

by sutraqueen101

person Anon
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn girl...on fire with that chapter !
person anonymous_fan
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
honey if you think this is your worst chapter id be dying to see your best lol. the smut was absolutely fantastic!
I want more ! more i tell you! MORE! lol . great work and update soon :-)
person keyonnamc
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great update. I guess this war was siding with Jesse all along. But who is the D.C. and what did that note mean? Better yet, what will happen next? I just can\'t wait for the next udpate.
../\\_/\\
.(^_^)
()().()()
person Uncertainties
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forget if i have reviewed this story before , , , i know i read it. anyway sorry if i havn\'t. Its an awesome story and i can\'t wait for more.

keep up the good work

Uncertainties
person Chrysler
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Thank god he wasn\'t thinking of daniel *shudder* tahts soo gross. Was he gonna say wife? Oooh, that sounds like a very good

conflict. And i love Aidian\'s competion, though it isn\'t a big one since Jesse doesn\'t adore him close enough but i bet there will bea

bit of jealousy going on, maybe if Jesse finds out about bianca there will be some more. Oh and the lemon wasn\'t bad, i actually

enjoyed it. 4 orgasms in three hours.....impressive lol. I\'m glad jesse got some ^^ I wanna know who this cobra dude is, hopefully

soon. Ahh so many directions this fic could be leading too, so much dept and conflict and i know i won\'t get bored but i\'ll probably

have to wait a while. Every fic worth trully reading takes forever!!!! This chapter was far from dissapointing and whoever was

clearly is blind to great work. I loved the ending very much, it was touching. He\'s falling in love and Aidain made him stay, how

cute!
person chrysler
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god.....!!!! what the fuck?!?!?!!?!?! that was so incredibly hot and then....he said daniel? awwwwwwww, that\'s just fucked up!!!!!!!!! Poor jesse. Dude, you\'ve gotta write more soon pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee? this is soo god, your characters are amazing and the plot is perfect but....daniel? oh my god, guess the rumor is true but i seriously thought he liked jesse and i liked that pairing too, i dunno, but please update soon
person Itachi
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hurry up!! >_< Update dammit, update....!!!!
person Shimisaki-kun
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope for your sake that Daniel is walking through the door and that\'s why Aidan said \'Daniel\'!! Anyway, update soon, I love the story.
person moe
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*__* i command you to update... your story is too sexy... :)
person Tesgura
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just found this story. What the hell?! Yelling Daniel\'s name when Jesse was sucking him! How rude! Love the story. Update soon.