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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit. i love this story. great bad guy! scares the hell outta me! :O and great job w/ daniel! he's an ass...and yet... he has a semi-reason... anyhow, i love jesse! and i'd like to see more of the story from aidan's side...
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January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you have to update i need to have more this is realy good
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm sooo jealous of jesse :P....really great story..i really love it.
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sky plums n roses
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sky plums n roses
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for sending me an email of your update. ^_^ Appreciate it a lot! As expected, your story is delish~! More Jesse/Aidan loving please? (puppy dog eyes) Keep it up. ^^
-Gunning Angel-
-Gunning Angel-
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I keep forgetting to ask did you perpose ly name Jesse Winthrop as in the first governer of New England, John Winthrop the puritain?
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, I kinda like Drake for some odd, twisted reason. Is that wrong? Anyways, wonderful story, keep up the good work.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I JUST LOVE THIS STORY! I love Jesse's personality. He reminds me a lot of myself but I guess I'm sort of hyper and he's not really and so... yeah. Drake seems like those macho body builder drug dealer/ex-con/pimp bitches. I hope he doesn't hurt Jesse! I really want Jesse to flirt with Evan and get Aidan all jealous and aggresive. I feel bad for Daniel, even though he's a total ass.
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January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is excellent. I like reading it and I like the flow of the story. Despite your saying that the sex wasn't really well-written because your muse left you 3 pages into that chapter, I find it rather good. Keep it up. ^_^
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January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh this just keep getting better and better, i feel sorry for Daniel! And scared for Jesse . Can't wait to see what happens!
Uncertainties
Uncertainties
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I'm really ashamed that I took so long to review this, but here it goes, ^^
"//That little fucker planned this. I should shit in his coffee//"
*That was priceless, I love Jesse and his 'street language', makes everything more fun!*
I'm curious about Bianca, the new tutor and the mysterious guy! Oh, and we can't forget about Jesse's past and tatoo!
Plz update, I'll be tracking this =)
"//That little fucker planned this. I should shit in his coffee//"
*That was priceless, I love Jesse and his 'street language', makes everything more fun!*
I'm curious about Bianca, the new tutor and the mysterious guy! Oh, and we can't forget about Jesse's past and tatoo!
Plz update, I'll be tracking this =)