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for My Desirable Prison

by sutraqueen101

person cherry
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great update... jesse should kill her...but slowly so he can watch. can't wait for the next chapter.
person LamaPie
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg noo so sad!!!! i love this story!! but i feel like crying... that or kill that wife of his... with a rusty blade... i dont like her, so you must be writing it well!! keep up the work!!
person Candycane
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finally!!!! It was good. The ending was great. But jesse says he has nothing left... but i thought the grandmother and jesse had gotten really close. I vote for Bianca to be beaten very badly... or killed. Overall it was great...
person Laaerie
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whoooa... I just read the WHOLE of your story in one sit :D NICE! good development and flow to the plot :D liked it!

Laaerie
person Anon
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!!!..an update. I have waited so long, and it was worth it. I feel horrible for Jesse. Aidan should have known better. Bianca is a bitch.

Loved the update. Can't wait for more.
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schedule February 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, dannigurl,
I am adding this fic to the 'Golden Nuggets (Original Slash List)' in Rants/Journals section.
I like this story and hope that you will continue, it's a way too good to abandon:)
person Anon
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update
person Jasmine
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honestly..first i was a little sceptic about this but now I like it and i will keep reading it
person jasmine
schedule August 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update update update update update update
person Mewa (i forgot to sign in lol)
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I havent read this in a while...really because i forgot about it and i didnt have a comp for while but thank god you emailed me that u put up a new chapter!!! WOOT! I re-read this fic and damn! It was great! It was almost as if i was reading it for the first time! I ignored everyone on all my messengers as i read it! It was that great and talk about the sex! Woo...*fans self* getting all heated just thinking back to it. lol I can't wait until you update again!! :D Update soon please!!! ^^ ...like tomorrow soon...lmao. No pressure or anything. lol Oh yeah, if i saw aidan on the streets i'd rape him! XD damn he's smexy!!! woot!

One more thing, daniel needs to go kill himself or something. He's all up in aidan and jesse's relationship. Psh, i would've kicked his ass if he interrupted me in the middle of me getting busy. OH! And i know that biana whore's gonna try fucking shit up! She needs to get slapped too! I dont care if she is preggy she needs to get kicked down a flight of stairs. <.< Okay let me stop before you really do kick her down a flight of stairs. lol

OK so just update soon please!! and add lots of more sex! it's so hot between them two guys! :D''''''''

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