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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this story! Please update soon!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice... Please update soon...
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sound like a very interesting storyline. You write well. Please update!
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was good please write more you HAVE TO write more I got to know what happens the suspense is killing me
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a very interesting start, i\'d like to see you continue with this.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice start! Very few errors that I could see. I can\'t wait to see the next part of this story. It\'s looking very promising so far! Keep up the good work!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a good start. I need to read more to give a better review, but the first chapter is interesting and I\'d like to see what happens next.
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, I hope you finish this. Jesse seems cool already, I like his character. I can\'t wait to see what you can do with this.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Love it. Love it. Many authors make their characters perfect, flawless, however, you made Jesse have faults, which in turn made him more human, easier to relate to. A sign of a truly great writer. Please, pretty please, update soon.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that it was okay. I\'m not sure where this is heading, so update so that I can see where it\'s heading! ^__^