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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude, this story is hella hott! lol! it put a HUGE smile to my face! It\'s great!Plz review soon!I will be looking for your next chapter!I cant wait and find out whats going to happen! anywayz....Peace!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dannigurl: This story was originally meant to be between a man and a woman but I changed it to slash. I hope I made the right decision. -> definetly the right decission!!!!!!! Keep on writing, it seems to have just started to get interessting! ^_~
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD lmao!!! oh poor poor kid. he\'s really in for it now!! woot! go aidan! make him ur love slave!! lol cant wait for the next update~!
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, awesome story! Love the satirical, caustic edge to Jesse\'s POV. Very impressive. Can\'t wait to read more!
And I don\'t think you went wrong changing it to slash.
At ALL.
And I don\'t think you went wrong changing it to slash.
At ALL.
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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent story.... can\'t wait to see what happens next.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh. Very nice. You DEFINITELY made the right decision in making it slash. I can\'t wait to read the next chapters. The grammatical mistakes aren\'t too bad and don\'t detract from the story. Keep up the good work!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is so cute and Jesse is such a little cutie, so adorable with his sarcasm and dirty vocabulary. I\'m in fact glad you changed it to slash girls have a little bit better morals and less likely to be caught stealing. Other than that keep up the good work! BYE
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it. A lot. Please update soon.
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t review stories often; only when I come across one that pulls me in and captivates my mind; like this one has. You have a true gift for story telling. Please update soon. Don\'t make us wait for this next chapter. So go write!! Amanda
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
better and better, i like how you put a description in of how Jesse looks, that helps out quite a bit.
keep it up! ^_^
keep it up! ^_^