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for My Desirable Prison

by sutraqueen101

person Shadow_Wolf22
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE I BEG OF YOU! THis is a good story and you have a way of writing that grabs attention.
person Fantasy101
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woot I\'m loving his soo far!!!! It\'s great!!! Can\'t wait for more!!!!!
person memorietrail
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was not boring at all .it great and i want more hope you have the next part out soon.
person Amanda
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The entire story idea is fantastic! I have waited months for the next chapter and now that it has finally came I can\'t wait to read more. So please have the next one out very soon!!! You have such a talent for story telling. Please more soon!!!!!!!!! Amanda
person Eci_Frog
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Greats story so far.
Keep writing.
person Zav
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love it, and can\'t wait for the next chapter. And ch. 3 wasn\'t boring! A story always (well, almost) need its background/\'starting up\' chapters.
Whoa, that\'s a lot of \'chapters\' in a few sentences. *giggles* Anyway, keep up the good work!

Love, Zav
person midnighteyes
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoy this story... Hope for updates soon!!!!
person Becca
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and want to read more! please don\'t disapoint me add more!! thanks
person midnghteyes
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really like this story... You can take it many different direction.. can\'t wait to see what happen nexts...
person Eci_Frog
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It`s well written and it leaves me hungry for more. So grabb that pen and start writting please....
Keep up the good work.