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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Loved this chapter! the last scene was sooo frustating!! i hope something happens between them... soon... =p
Plz update soon!!
See ya!
Plz update soon!!
See ya!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue. hehe oh sylvia is very interesting. leaves plate of cookies to help get the next chapter out faster.
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This fanfiction is really great! Please update soon! Cant\' wait to read more! =p~
I loved Jesse and I think i\'m going to love Aidan too (he seems sooo cool)... LOV YA! ^^
I loved Jesse and I think i\'m going to love Aidan too (he seems sooo cool)... LOV YA! ^^
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story, and I cant wait for an update!
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August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3 is a great example of building tension and building the narrative. How else are we going to know and get into the characters if there isn\'t information presented to them outside of XXX. XD The narrative flowed smoothly and the action is moving at a good pace. You\'re rocking it. Keep it up.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD lmao!!! oh man i love the maid!! shes freaking hilarious!!! XD ohhh and i cant wait to see what\'s with grandma scott. update again soon!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grandma Scott sounds like the Devil, himself....hehehehe this is going to be fun. more plz.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
buahaha *grins and waves* makes me giggling keep writing! i wanna know what happens!
peace V
peace V
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really fasinating. I like Jesse, he\'s a really neat charecter. I hope you add more soon. When you do could you please e-mail me to let me know?
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July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you are writing this story again! I loved the 1st two chapters and couldnt wait for the 3rd so when I saw ur story again and with a chapter 3! i was excited! It wasnt completly boring...its nice to know wat he has to do and abide by! but anywayz! update soon!!