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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god that was fucking hot!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting can\'t wait for more.
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its good and all, but the part at the beginning where they are driving to some house is kinda out of place. Use hte next chappy to tie up the stuff with their mom, then bring them to this \"retreat.\"
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May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good story if this first chapter is any indication. I definitely like. ^_^