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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay.. the first review... I really liked your story... very interesting and lots of potential for plot twist... I hope you keep writing.. the only thing I found was minor mistakes like using my instead of me.. those sort of things... Avgreyzan seems interesting... i\'ll love to see who else shows up....