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for The Teen and the Little Girl - Prologe

by hs321

person ayesha
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story. but don\'t u think it\'s bad to have a 14 year old fucking a 4 year old? i mean come on, she\'s 10 years younger than him...
person echo
schedule May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you are a sick fuck who needs a lot of help. what where you thinking when you wrote this i mean are crazy, do you go around playgounds looking a for year olds come dude she just a baby barely out of diapers.....WHATS WRONG WITH YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cardinal
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like, update soon.
person madmax
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are one sick fuck, do you go around doing that to four year old you could atleast made her older.....i mean thats nasty...FREAK!!!!!!!!
person Kikvws
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o_O Dude. No. That\'s just...no. I hope you\'re keeping this twisted fantasy as just that; and even so, I think you need some serious psychiatric help.
person your weird
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kid theres something wrong with u. You\'re making the kid age 4, even too sick to deal with, a four year old wouldnt even eally react the way ur portraying it. If ur going to continue with this story the girls definatly going to have to be a little older, not only becasue its messed up that shes so young, but because its not eralistic, she owuldnt \'suck him whole\' shes 4!