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God, that is so sick. More! More!

Okay, seriously, this story\'s fucked up, and you really need to learn how to spell and type properly. Why under God\'s green earth did you decide to make the female 4 fucking years old? There\'s no way that even if you WANTED to have sex with her that she\'d be old enough or big enough to take that...she couldn\'t be more than 2 1/2 or 3 feet tall! Get a new story or a new subject matter...this story sucks ass...

fiction yeah but all over the world children are molested and at four they can become victims of gross things this is just not right would you put a four year old in any of your stories? children should not be put into sexual/erotic stories end of discussion. and besides that yes this is \"FICTION\" the point is that someone had to have come up with it. it may be a fantasy and a person with that kind of fantasy needs serious psychological help. so before all you perverts out there who say \"its just fiction\" and \"hes not saying hed do it in real life\" it does happen and what if this author (if you can even really call him that since the story was crap along with the plot) is really a petifile and he wrote this out of some strange wierd fantasy. maybe im taking it out of paportion but you people have to admit it was gross.

Dude, your sick.
It is a bit funny though. In a sick kind of way.
Please continue.

that is kinda really sick 4 yr olds

but i\'m curious as to what will happen next so update i guess

how fucking sick are you 4 year olds can\'t even take baths by themselfs and you put that in your
story
you fucking sick bastard 10 i can see but .............4 ewwwwww

What was that?!!? That was the shortest prologue int he world!!! Get on with story!!! =) Update soon!

hmmm...perhaps not sucking him whole...do you mean licking?? That I can believe..No way can a 4 yr old suck him whole.

And for those who don\'t like it: DON\'T FUCKING READ IT. IT\'S MAKE-BELIEVE! Just because he wrote it, doesn\'t mean he wants it to happen or anyhting. Haven\'t you seen the rape and incest stories all over here?!?! FANFICTION duh!

I seriously hope you have some terrific twist in mind, because this story is just gross. You sick fuck! A 4 year old! A fucking 4 year old! She\'s just a fucking baby, and you have her doing all these perverted things... plus, a four year old sucking him whole? Yeah, his penis would have to be about one inch long.

Oh, and do some stuff before ever posting a single word of a story on here ever again:

1. Get some less disturbing fantasies
2. Stop being a perverted asshole
3. Learn how to spellcheck
And, if you can\'t do any of these things, 4. Jump into a pool or a bathtub or, you know, whatever\'s handy, duck your head under the water, and keep it there while you count to 1,000,000. Slowly.

Thank you very much.

okay...I can see maybe 10 years old, but 4...Man you are sick...and anyone who thinks this is a great sttory is just as sick...