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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, however,I think a 4 yr.old would not be able to suck a penis a the way down. jmo
And, screw everyone's replies it's called fanfiction for a reason they shouldn't read it if they don'nt like it. Also, just try a spellchecker or have someone read the next chapter for you before posting.
And, screw everyone's replies it's called fanfiction for a reason they shouldn't read it if they don'nt like it. Also, just try a spellchecker or have someone read the next chapter for you before posting.
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August 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not even going to read this...Just the description...Sick son of a bitch, 4 years old?!
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! i would like to see what happens next!
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The subject matter leaves a lot to be desired. And, unfortunately, so do your writing skills. I believe anyone should be allowed to write any fantasy they wish, however, fantasy does not excuse poor writing.
To put it in simple terms? You write bad. Learn to write good!
To put it in simple terms? You write bad. Learn to write good!
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October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um...if a little girl sucked him whole, then he must have an extremely small penis.
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please wrtie the storie soon
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August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
though I commonly don\'t like sex stories about 4 year old girls, I find this one intriguing and even a little erotic. I will continue to await further chapter\'s to see what kind perverse fantasies this boy can play out with a willing but very innocent child.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you gonna make more?
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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapters are short but they\'re good, very well written, write the next one soon :-)
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